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After reading your comment again, I really found something inappropriate and want to point it out just for you to improve (you said you want others do so for you):
1. "if I begain to write some essay,"----if I write something/some essays,
2. " many faults in my artical "-----many mistakes/errors in my article
3. "sign my mistake out."-----point my mistake out
4. Some typos (spelling mistakes): 'begain'--begin; 'artical'--article; 'they many'--they may.
Just for your reference! I hope to see your comment again!