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Here are some things to correct on Blog #1.
I think we can change the tense below and make this two sentences.
Original sentence= Sometimes people could not understand where is my country, they think that I live in a state of the USA.
I think it will be better like this: Sometimes people can not understand where my country is. They think that I live in a state of the USA.
In another part we should change the tense in the verb meet to "I met many American and English people here and I decided to learn English." I met is the same tense as I decided to learn. (Past tense)
The next sentence also needs some work. It is too long and can be broken down into three or four sentences. Try making one thought per each sentence and see how many you can make from it. You can change it here or you can message me with your changes. I will make more suggestions and tell you why we should change the parts that need to be changed.
The blog is very good and you don't have many mistakes for a first blog. The mistakes you have are very common for new writers and easy to learn from. I also want you to be thinking about your next blog topic that you will write on. :)
It is time to write another blog Nini. You need to stay in practice so you can continue to improve.
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