Jeany

Shijiazhuang Female

Age: 61 Birthday: March 20

Hi Jeany,
Thanks for your writing. I have corrected it and you will need to carefully compare your writing with my corrections to find the mistakes. Sometimes it is not a mistake, but I replace your English with a more natural way of using it. I respect anyone who attempts to learn English because I think it is very difficult in many ways. But when I see Chinese, I think I probably could never learn it.
If you have any questions about my corrections, please ask me. I suggest you write something to me about your life, your country, your friends, your family, you experience with English, - anything that you can think of. It is the process of writing and being corrected that will improve your English greatly. Do you read many articles or essays? It is good to read a lot of English to improve your vocabulary, sentence structure and word combinations (collocations). To improve your listening and pronunciation it is best to have an English speaker to speak to. But if that is not available, it is very good to watch and listen to English TV or movies with subtitles. It is a slow process acquiring an ear for our language. It requires a lot of listening.
For now, let’s just have you write and I will correct it. Then I will learn more about what you need specifically. Then we can talk about possible lessons to learn and articles to read. I hope this helps.
The main challenges for Asian learners of English is using our articles (a, an, the) which do not exist in your languages. Also I notice my Asian students tend to forget to use and pronounce plurals, where we add the “s” to a singular word to make it plural. A cat / many cats. Please note that passion is not used as a verb. Passion is a strong feeling and is a thing, thus a noun. However we can do something passionately (adverb), in a passionate manner, thus you “have been passionately focusing on learning English.”

Corrections:
Thank you very much for replying to me. l surely want to improve my English skills, especially in writing. l do not even know where l should start nor how to do it. l am aware of how difficult it is to do it, but l will never give up on it. In fact, l am fascinated with the English language and l have been passionately focusing on learning English. It has taken me about 7 years so far and l am still enjoying learning it. Would you like to teach me some sentence structures or the frame of structure in articles or essays? What do you think? Yes, surely l want to have a good command of the English language. There still will be difficulties that l may meet during the process of learning English. l am looking forward to progressing more in English here. Thank you again for your kindness and your precious time.

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Nass Jackson November 6, 2020 9:11

Hello lady, how are you doing today? My name is Nass, i will like to practice language with you in exchange of my language.
Bill the English Teacher February 11, 2009 4:15

Hi Jeany,
Thanks for your writing. I have corrected it and you will need to carefully compare your writing with my corrections to find the mistakes. Sometimes it is not a mistake, but I replace your English with a more natural way of using it. I respect anyone who attempts to learn English because I think it is very difficult in many ways. But when I see Chinese, I think I probably could never learn it.
If you have any questions about my corrections, please ask me. I suggest you write something to me about your life, your country, your friends, your family, you experience with English, - anything that you can think of. It is the process of writing and being corrected that will improve your English greatly. Do you read many articles or essays? It is good to read a lot of English to improve your vocabulary, sentence structure and word combinations (collocations). To improve your listening and pronunciation it is best to have an English speaker to speak to. But if that is not available, it is very good to watch and listen to English TV or movies with subtitles. It is a slow process acquiring an ear for our language. It requires a lot of listening.
For now, let’s just have you write and I will correct it. Then I will learn more about what you need specifically. Then we can talk about possible lessons to learn and articles to read. I hope this helps.
The main challenges for Asian learners of English is using our articles (a, an, the) which do not exist in your languages. Also I notice my Asian students tend to forget to use and pronounce plurals, where we add the “s” to a singular word to make it plural. A cat / many cats. Please note that passion is not used as a verb. Passion is a strong feeling and is a thing, thus a noun. However we can do something passionately (adverb), in a passionate manner, thus you “have been passionately focusing on learning English.”

Corrections:
Thank you very much for replying to me. l surely want to improve my English skills, especially in writing. l do not even know where l should start nor how to do it. l am aware of how difficult it is to do it, but l will never give up on it. In fact, l am fascinated with the English language and l have been passionately focusing on learning English. It has taken me about 7 years so far and l am still enjoying learning it. Would you like to teach me some sentence structures or the frame of structure in articles or essays? What do you think? Yes, surely l want to have a good command of the English language. There still will be difficulties that l may meet during the process of learning English. l am looking forward to progressing more in English here. Thank you again for your kindness and your precious time.
Bill the English Teacher February 10, 2009 22:17

Jeany,
I used to work with a woman named Jeanie. As for your desire to improve your writing I am very willing to help you in that area. You can write to me and I can correct your English. That seems to work best when using the Internet. I do see some need for corrections in what you wrote. I also can help with grammar issues. But speaking and listening are beyond my ability when I can't talk to you in person. Do I have permission to correct your writings? Let me know.
Bill the English Teacher February 10, 2009 15:18

Hi Jeany,
Welcome to Englishclub. I hope you find it helpful. You can ask me any questions about English or you can write to me and I will correct your English.
Jeany February 10, 2009 2:35

l am fascinated to English language and l enjoy learning it a lot. However, the English language is difficult to manage. l would like to make great strides in learning English here. Thank you very much.

Jeany from China
param February 10, 2009 2:34

WELCOME!!!! to MyEnglishClub...

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