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This is my writing according to data I was given. You guys please help me correct it, especially who is good at English or IELTS test. Thank you so much for taking your time to help me. Here is a topic: Untitled.png and my writing.

The data shows the sales of Coca-Cola in regions in 2000 such as North America, Latin  America, Europe, Asia, Africa and Middle East. In addition, the line graph illustrates the price of share from 1996 to 2001.

It is clear that the proportions of sales ha

Suddenly the fox who lives in my garden screaming. I look through the window, I couldn't see any thing. I decided to go out and check. When I walk near the fence I can see the mother fox try to help the baby fox who stuck in between the gate and the fence. As soon as I walk near the gate, the mother fox is scared and run away. I decided to help the baby fox. My husband brought a cutting tool and he cut the fence and released the baby fox. The mother fox is watching every thing from far and run t

A true friend can make you laugh so hard you pee a little 

A Significant Achievement In The World Of Medicine…

n general, people get shocked/traumatized in hearing the word “MALARIA” because we all know the outcomes of malaria, and on the other hand, how it terribly effects on the interests of our people as a whole. For centuries, especially people living in tropical and sub-tropical regions have been suffering from malaria because there is no practical way-out to curb it successfully. In the human history, a larger number of people died of malaria posi

What comes to your mind when you just flick through the topic without scanning the whole? You might think of what this person is about to say with “0s” and “1s”. Absolutely, in this so called “modern era”, although we’ve simply ignored it because of “our busy lifestyle”, the entire world depends on “0s” and “1s”.

It is human nature that we knowingly or unknowingly forget simple things around us but focus on big issues because we are so interested in talking about “big… big things”. As you aware,

Judge a person by his questions rather than by his answers. 
I asked an old man what is more important to love or to be loved? The old man replied me back What is more important to a bird? The left wing or the right wing?

Her mind was busy while she was looking at her girls. She loves them so much. She is expecting another baby; she longed to have a boy. Her husband also loves to have a boy and told her that this time it must be a boy. A few days later she walked into doctor’s office to have sonogram to see if the baby is ok and also to find out about baby’s gender.  She was informed that the baby was fine and the baby was a girl.

She didn’t know whether to be happy or not and how to give the news to her husband.

Her mind was busy while she was looking at her girls. She loves them so much. She is expecting another baby; she longed to have a boy. Her husband also loves to have a boy and told her that this time it must be a boy. A few days later she walked into doctor’s office to have sonogram to see if the baby is ok and also to find out about baby’s gender.  She was informed that the baby was fine and the baby was a girl.

She didn’t know whether to be happy or not and how to give the news to her husband.

Dear friends, I love pets so very much. I can't stand others'  offending them or making them homeless. When I was a boy my parents gave me a dog on my 7th birthday. It was a golden retriever female. They said "It is your friend and from now on, you should be aware she will die if you don't take care of her!" It was the best lesson in my life although I lived through much. We made friends and it is so easy to make a dog a part of your life! She lived a happy life but she had died before I went to

The happiest time or moment in any woman's life is just after the first divorce

The tragedy of life is not death,But we let die inside of us while we still alive,But just few lives in someone`s heart 

Watch your thoughts.They become your words
Watch your words.They become actions
Watch your actions.They become habits
watch your habits.They become your character
and watch your character.It becomes your destiny

Hi everybody . There are many ideas that modern woman is not dependent on men. How do you think? Is that an interesting idea?
For me, it's a good idea but not quite right.
Women may be financially independent, have a stable income job but if there is a beautiful love should remain held and nurtured to have a fulfilling life. But modern women to always cultivate the knowledge, life skills and are constantly trying to become more interesting.
Give and will be refunded, but should know when to give

! hate waiting but if waiting means being able to be with you,I`ll keep waiting for as long as forever to be with you

I may be thousands of miles away but you are still the first things on my mind

http://zuniredsenglish.blogspot.com/2015/08/ingenious-inventions-vol-iii.html

people were created to be loved things were created to be used The reason why the world is in Chaos is because things are being loved and people are being used

I laugh,I love,I hope,I try,I hurt,I need,I fear,I cry And I know you do the same things too.So we are really not that different me and you lol