hi rana, nice to hear from you, i'm sorry you didn't pass hope you do well next time, but what was wrong this time?
i for everyone's surprise did pass!!! from the first time you know!.....thanx for the web site i'll check it out...keep in touch
hi how are you doing? this's a little bit wierd as i'm not sure whether you're the same rana i met yesterday at the driving's practical test...if it's you then i wanted to say hello
!! and hope to communicate with you here...
laila
I would grade you with a 93 out of 100. Your mistakes were small ones. In general your ability to communicate was excellent. It was mostly punctuation mistakes and a couple word order mistakes. There were some spelling mistakes. But it was really good. I was impressed.
I encourage you to write to me as often as you want. That is why I am here in Englishclub. I will always try to write back to you and provide corrections. If I don't do it right away that just means I am busy with life, but I will always try to write when I can.
Here is a correction of your words. What a very nice description you gave of the view outside your window. I almost felt like I was there smelling the spices and seeing the cat and her babies.
Thanks for your quick response. I wrote these words yesterday. If you don’t mind, could you check it (writing challenge#5)?
I’m looking through my kitchen window and there is a small garden outside, some thyme, basil, a lemon tree and the amazing odor of some flower. I can’t describe the smell because it mixes with the winter smell which is overcomes it, There is also a cat with her babies hiding in a small carton. She is trying to protect her babies from the cold, It is an incredible sight. I will put some milk out for her and her babies. There is nothing to say after this sight. I just stay and watch.
Rana,
If you would like to write to me I can correct your writing. You can write to me about anything that you find interesting. I can then show you how we say the same thing using common English arrangment of words.
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hello my name is ola i like to practise english via skype . my level is intermediate . please inform me if you want
i for everyone's surprise did pass!!! from the first time you know!.....thanx for the web site i'll check it out...keep in touch
!! and hope to communicate with you here...
laila
I'd surely try it. Thank you so much! :-)
Thanks for your quick response. I wrote these words yesterday. If you don’t mind, could you check it (writing challenge#5)?
I’m looking through my kitchen window and there is a small garden outside, some thyme, basil, a lemon tree and the amazing odor of some flower. I can’t describe the smell because it mixes with the winter smell which is overcomes it, There is also a cat with her babies hiding in a small carton. She is trying to protect her babies from the cold, It is an incredible sight. I will put some milk out for her and her babies. There is nothing to say after this sight. I just stay and watch.
If you would like to write to me I can correct your writing. You can write to me about anything that you find interesting. I can then show you how we say the same thing using common English arrangment of words.