Mayumi

Hong Ha May 10, 2010 15:58

I was really shocked!!
Hong Ha May 10, 2010 15:57

Here, watch this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ncGcw9si1Qo
Nadiyah May 10, 2010 4:26

ooh mayumee, your song is beautiful!
Mark Bautista, a singer from Philippines.you're entitled to receive my card ... really I like all your poems but I don't know how to write it ... great! thanks

-Nadiyah-
ray May 10, 2010 4:01

hi,,Mayumi,,
it's been a while,hope everything is fine with you.Because you didn't talk in ec main and seems you didn't receive the msg i sent you.anyway.wish you all the best and keep moving on practising english.

By the way,i would keep what i promised you,hhaa

Best regards
yours faithful

lei
Hong Ha May 8, 2010 12:41

Oh, and is the singer Big Mouth BM from your country, too? I have watched a video of her making the horse sound. I was so shock!! You know, her appearance . And her strange talent, too. It's just so...wow, and so... eww=))
Hong Ha May 8, 2010 12:26

Hi Mayumi!

Yes, I've watched it! Actually, that was the first video of her that I had ever watched. Since then, I totally love her!! She made a whole country proud of her...
mido May 8, 2010 6:06

i think you just need to keep going in your way and do what your heart wants becouse it's nothing like love moment with the one who you love and try to trust becouse you know that he can't let you go he can't lose you
Forget-me-Not May 7, 2010 22:17

Dearest Mayumi,
Thank you so much for the sweet poem you sent on my wall. It really touched my soul. Your page here is also inspiring . I am happy to be your friend.
Manuela
♥Tuna♥ May 7, 2010 16:28

So ... sorry friend I had disconnection :) inshallah we will talk another time :)
Expector Smith May 6, 2010 13:34

Hi mayumi

Thanks for your comment! I'd say your writing is already good, and it seems you are making progress every day.

As for 'connecting words or phrases', I can give you some examples here:
--first(ly), second(ly), to begin with, then
--moreover, what is more, again, also, in addition
--except for, instead, apart from this
--for example, for instance, such as
--however, in contrast, in the same way
--after all, anyway, none the less
--in the meantime, meanwhile
--so, therefore, thus, hence
--in conclusion, in short, to sum up
--by the way, incidentally, as for

It's a good idea to use some connecting words or phrases in your writing, which can make your meaning clearer.

Hope it helps!
Expector