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Alone No More

Posted by zaibi on February 15, 2010

Friend

I was sitting alone,

Suddenly, I felt

Someone is looking at me,

I felt shy, shy and shy,

After sometime I

When I started looking quaintly,

I felt there was no one near to me

I looked around many a times but could not find any one

At last I looked into the sky

The moon was looking at me

I just asked him to come down to me

It refused, refused and continued to refuse,

It said I am engaged with someone

I am engaged with someone,

I am engaged with someone

I start walking with my head down

Then I realize

And I saw

I am not walking alone

The moon is walking along with me

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najla February 24, 2010 19:03

hi zebaish
so nice poem
wish you the best
Myriam_B February 22, 2010 23:37

Hi Zeb, Your poem is wonderful, thank you for sharing us.

Meryem
Dreamer Ḿǻ₦ February 22, 2010 18:33

You never walk alone ZEBAISH keep your dream with you untill it will be real
Ellie February 22, 2010 18:21

This poem is really nice, reminded me of "footprints in the sand ".... because we are never alone .... there is always someone on our side!

Take care!
Ellie
green February 22, 2010 5:15

Great post

Wonderfull poem

best of luck for u zebi :)
Rini hartuti February 21, 2010 5:56

wow...so nice poem dear zeebiii...that's nice time to be alone ,.sometimes we need it to correct ourself, and then we feel closely with God..I think that sense is the most important in our life. So,..I think life is simple , we just need "keep smiling"...(*_*)
Nadiyah February 21, 2010 3:55

I'm here, Zebaish!
sometimes we need time to be alone. anything we can do, especially for self-reflection and introspection to fix something wrong we have done ...

thanks, friend for sharing, keep your smile

-Nadiyah-
Mayumi February 20, 2010 11:31

Sometimes we need to be alone by all our own selves,, 'cause this is the time that we really can feel peace of mine....me just staring the moon makes me feel peaceful and calm...

You're poem is simple but captivating, so good...YOu use only simple words but it has a great impact to the one reading it...

thanks for sharing it w/ us....and continue writing..you are good at it..
Awan February 20, 2010 11:14

wow good poem. Do you write it by your self or paste from any other blog.
Alejandra Lagunas February 19, 2010 0:42

I think is true, the most of time we feel alone, and is difficult to realize how many things are around.... anyway it depends what you are looking for.
keep on writing