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If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Hometown is the town which people have lived for long years in and probably continue to live so in the person’s heart has an important place. We love our hometowns even if they have some negative conditions to live. If you asked me to change one important thing about my hometown, Balıkesir, what would i change? So let me tell about Balıkesir to decide on it.
Balıkesir is a good place to continue a calm life because has just 200.000 population. This smallness provides many advantages to people of it. Transportation is very easy, fast so that you won’t often stay in traffic jam while driving to work, school, etc and i know traffic problem is the biggest factor that make people stressful. Small cities are the lowest ones on crime rate so people would live in safety more.
In my hometown, has a university that makes its education level and young population increase. Actually, they need some activities to have fun and improve their skills. In my advencing small town, it is very difficult to find all these. I think it is a subject that must be changed. Towns are like humankind. Also for them growing is an obligatory. Although i am glad about low population of my hometown, at the same time not glad about these low activities. In the reason, majors must take more initiative about it. However, they always worked for their goodness not for future. The future of a society is at youth’s hands. Working for the future means working for the youth and for them the best would be useful activities in the city.
In conclusion, in my home town the only thing i wanna change is absency of activites because once a day, we all were young people that need having such activities.
Thanks you for sharing dear Mariam.
@ Mariam
I have some opinion about your quotation, ya, we have to confirm that is right, but, in the modern life I think the Luck roles the important decision for your destiny.
For example, If you came from a rich family, you have so many chance to learning, earn experience, communicate with good relationship and then easy to reach your dream, your success with your passion, all is very convenience to push you reach it.
But in position, If you came from a poor family, you have to earn money for spending every expense of life, beside, you have to support your parents in the case they are unemployment. In addition, you have to feed yourself, and maybe your siblings... so the question is when and How can you reach your dream?... the very difficult question.
Ya, of course, you can say that time will change everything and after all, you can reach your dream with all your strive. That's great. But, franking to say, that time maybe is very late for enjoy your success, hihi, maybe if I judge in this side, seems to be some cruel with someone, because the success can make you happy just a moment if you feel that's enough.
Finally, I still appreciate your quotation, because for human, living everyday with their own desire, determination and passion are all interesting and exciting experience during their life. that's enough, don't care so much about jealous, and selfish, they just make you become under human.
That's all. Hope to receive your judge, and correction my writing from everyone. Thank you for your interesting topic! :)
It's perfect idea to create such as this group. I'm really in need to improve my writting skills as well as know the essentials of convenient essay. I like discuss of any point amid any text so as to enlarge my cognitive balance.
Thank you My Nguyen, and Congratulation!!!
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