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Please correct my essay

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Universities have always been the origin of cultural evolution in every societies. It is argued that post-secondary education ought to take the same number of men and women students in each major. I’m totally opposed to this idea. I believe that, universities should accept students with respect to their skills and interests, regardless of their gender.

I think that, universities should accept students in accordance with their skills. The best and the most practical way to assess the ability and talents of students is through their scores in university courses. For example, students who wants to pursue their study in some engineering topics, must show good aptitude in mathematics and physics. Furthermore, they need to have a special talent to work with numbers and some specialized software packages, like programming skills. This is one of the criteria that a student must be accepted in a university.

The other essential criterion for students to be admitted into a university is their interests. If individuals are into a subject, they will definitely show more inspiration to their courses at university. Because interest can motivate people to work in harsh circumstances, that is inevitable in some particular jobs. For instance, to become a good doctor, being hard working and hence not to surrender in severe conditions, that everybody may confront during the study and work, are crucial. Therefore, in this situations having a strong interest and motivation can help individuals to survive.

In conclusion, I think accepting the same number of male and female students in each major is not a good factor for having and training effective work-force for the society. In my opinion, interests and skills are the two key factors for being accepted by universities.

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I have so many memorable photos with my families and friends in my laptop archive. Among them there is a photo that I love so much because it reminds me so many sweet memories.

The photo was taken by my cousin last spring in my sister’s house when all of the family members and some relatives gathered for the celebration of new year; Nowruz. In this photo all individuals were happy and enjoying the coming of spring and new year with each other’s companionship.

One of the most special feature of the photo is its symmetry and clarity. The picture is high quality enough so that everybody’s face is so clear. Furthermore the photo is special for me since it represents strong bond between my family members, relatives and acquaintances. Besides, the other noteworthy aspect is that there are multiple generations in this photo from grandchildren to grandparents.

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