Hello everyonewelcome here...I have funny and good idea to improve our english ,don't worry just share and let us write a good and funny story.I will begin the story with a sentencethen the following member write a sentence.. like that.. She came early from her workyour turngood luckEmilie
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Hi Zahra:
Lovely story my dear. I will continue the story:
"what is she doing here?"
"Oh,you can ask her yourself!"
My dear friends let us give them names,help me in choosing with thanks.
Zahra said:
hi here i give you my complete story and i also give a sentence to complete others' story.
She came early from her work yesterday because she had promised her 8-yr-old son to take him to the park.his son was shy an introvert and he hadn't ever asked his mom to take him to play in a playground before.so as he asked his mom she accepted.so they went to the park in the afternoon.but the boy didn't want to play with other kids in the playground.instead he asked his mom to take him near the lake in the park and let him be alone for an hour.She got surprised because of what he asked her.she tried to convince him not to insist on being alone.also she tried to know why he asked that.but the boy was just silent looking at his mom's eyes in an innocent way.his mom didn't want to make him more disappointed.so she accepted to leave him there alone for an hour.but she hid behind a tree to see what he wants to do.the boy stood in front of the water.closed his eyes and started to sing a song which was one of his poems.the words were well organized and it seemed that they were dancing gracefully as they came out of the boy's mouth.the water was listening to him in peace and silence and the breeze was blowing as if it was patting the boys face.the boy was singing for his anonymous angel whom he imagined in his dreams and was created because his mom always told him that he has an angel taking care of him.he was asking his angel to come to him and take him to the heaven.as he told this word his mom ran to him crying and hugged him and asked him not to pray his angel to take him because she believed that if he wants to go,he will go.the boy touched his mom's hands and said"mom!i found my angel;she is you and my heaven is being held in your arms.thanks God."
OK,now i continue the previous sentence written by Shinystar: ...,He answered her" She came to ask me about you?" the woman said:"what do you mean?"he answered:"first let me know what do you think about me.it seems that you don't trust me."...... continue this.
hi here i give you my complete story and i also give a sentence to complete others' story.
She came early from her work yesterday because she had promised her 8-yr-old son to take him to the park.his son was shy an introvert and he hadn't ever asked his mom to take him to play in a playground before.so as he asked his mom she accepted.so they went to the park in the afternoon.but the boy didn't want to play with other kids in the playground.instead he asked his mom to take him near the lake in the park and let him be alone for an hour.She got surprised because of what he asked her.she tried to convince him not to insist on being alone.also she tried to know why he asked that.but the boy was just silent looking at his mom's eyes in an innocent way.his mom didn't want to make him more disappointed.so she accepted to leave him there alone for an hour.but she hid behind a tree to see what he wants to do.the boy stood in front of the water.closed his eyes and started to sing a song which was one of his poems.the words were well organized and it seemed that they were dancing gracefully as they came out of the boy's mouth.the water was listening to him in peace and silence and the breeze was blowing as if it was patting the boys face.the boy was singing for his anonymous angel whom he imagined in his dreams and was created because his mom always told him that he has an angel taking care of him.he was asking his angel to come to him and take him to the heaven.as he told this word his mom ran to him crying and hugged him and asked him not to pray his angel to take him because she believed that if he wants to go,he will go.the boy touched his mom's hands and said"mom!i found my angel;she is you and my heaven is being held in your arms.thanks God."
OK,now i continue the previous sentence written by Shinystar:
...,He answered her" She came to ask me about you?"
the woman said:"what do you mean?"he answered:"first let me know what do you think about me.it seems that you don't trust me."......
continue this.
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Thanks my dear,we are waiting for Shinystar to answer..
Millas said:
Lovely story my dear. I will continue the story:
"what is she doing here?"
"Oh,you can ask her yourself!"
My dear friends let us give them names,help me in choosing with thanks.
Zahra said:
You are shiny really.Thanks alot for your sharing with us..Have a nice day.
shinystar said:
Thanks alot my dear for the begining. Have a nice day.
Millas said:
She came early from her work yesterday because she had promised her 8-yr-old son to take him to the park.his son was shy an introvert and he hadn't ever asked his mom to take him to play in a playground before.so as he asked his mom she accepted.so they went to the park in the afternoon.but the boy didn't want to play with other kids in the playground.instead he asked his mom to take him near the lake in the park and let him be alone for an hour.She got surprised because of what he asked her.she tried to convince him not to insist on being alone.also she tried to know why he asked that.but the boy was just silent looking at his mom's eyes in an innocent way.his mom didn't want to make him more disappointed.so she accepted to leave him there alone for an hour.but she hid behind a tree to see what he wants to do.the boy stood in front of the water.closed his eyes and started to sing a song which was one of his poems.the words were well organized and it seemed that they were dancing gracefully as they came out of the boy's mouth.the water was listening to him in peace and silence and the breeze was blowing as if it was patting the boys face.the boy was singing for his anonymous angel whom he imagined in his dreams and was created because his mom always told him that he has an angel taking care of him.he was asking his angel to come to him and take him to the heaven.as he told this word his mom ran to him crying and hugged him and asked him not to pray his angel to take him because she believed that if he wants to go,he will go.the boy touched his mom's hands and said"mom!i found my angel;she is you and my heaven is being held in your arms.thanks God."
OK,now i continue the previous sentence written by Shinystar:
...,He answered her" She came to ask me about you?"
the woman said:"what do you mean?"he answered:"first let me know what do you think about me.it seems that you don't trust me."......
continue this.
She said"Who is this woman?",He answered her" She came to ask me about you?"..Complete please.
Very nice way.
Millas said: