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It is my recent realization that it would not be fruitful until we do re-reading of our previous learnt grammar lessons. And, another must to do thing is we should maintain a diary/ note book to write down what we learnt or we may get print out copies from the net. I am telling it because when I have started again asking questions here, I found I asked some of these questions before!
Respected,Danny Sir! Please go ahead with your corrections. I'll be grateful to you for this! Thank you!
Dear Sach! So, what to do with your story about a cricket player? The problem is that I am not a baseball fan either. I can ask somebody who is tomorrow if it is OK
Thank you,Danny! I appreciate you for your unselfish dedication to help people! You are such a great human being!
Hi, Sach! Here is your corrected text. Your English is quite good.
I wanna reveal the truth how important it is to learn English to have a better carrier and to have respect in your own society. I live in India where people are so crazy about English. If they find a guy who understands English and can have a conversation with people, he is like Barak Obama for them. Though, I agree to the fact that the knowledge of English is no more luxury but a necessity now days to have a better carrier as well as reputation in your society and it also gives you advanced opportunities in your life. However, as for me, learning English has always been fun, passion __since my childhood __ and the burning passion is still here to improve it as much as I can to communicate with people around the globe because it is the international language of communication. If you wanna travel, read English books and watch English movies, you __ have to learn this language.
Hello,Danny
I wanna reveal the truth how important it is to learn English to have a better currier and to have respect in your own society. I live in India where people are so crazy about English. If they find a guy who understand English and can have a conversation with people is like Barak Obama for them. Though, I agree to the fact that the knowledge of English is no more luxury than a necessity now days to have a better currier as well as reputation in your society and it also gets you opportunities to advance in your life.However,for me,learning English is always been a fun,passion for me since my childhood days and the burning passion is still there to improve it as much as I can to communicate with people across the globe because it is the international language of communication. If you wanna travel,read English books,and watch English movies, you will have to learn this language.
Hi, dear Wolf! First, I have to say this text contains a few grammar mistakes. But its sense is quite clear. I will rewrite it in other words.
Some movies impress you so deeply that you feel as if living through all the events you see on the screen. You never feel sleepy watching them over and over. You stop realizing yourself, you disapper(as if vanishing in the blue) and start living in that movie. And when the movie is over, you can't stop it. You still think about it all the time mentally returning to those events willing to experience all those events in details time and again or, maybe to act somehow differently in some of the situations(redo those twists and turns)
Dear Wolf! The second is better as there is no tautology. An the non-official level we usually say "Thanks for (your) replying"
Lone Wolf said:
Dear Seeker! Here is your corrected story.
I have a__ dog. His name is Max. Max is a faithful friend of mine. I have made a doghouse for him. He rests like a king in the doghouse. His nature is unusual. He hardly barks without a proper reason. He has self-respect. He is not greedy. He is not interested in the eatables __given by others except his master. Max keeps watch of my house. He does not allow anyone to enter my house without my permission. He barks when a stranger approaches my house. Max has a keen (acute) sense of smell. Once I put my watch somewhere and forgot. Max sensed the problem and started searching. He jumped in the bed and found the watch there. He mouthed it and came to me __ proudly. I was delighted to get my watch again. I have to admit that Max is my faithful friend.
Seeker said:
Dear Teachers
I tried to make a short paragraph, please help me for the correction.
There are many factors that cause of violence in school. Mostly they come from a broken family, divorced parents, busy parents, etc. Parents should give more attention to their kids in their daily lives. Otherwise, it will get them into violence in school. In fact, we can see many parents are working shifts and go home late so they don't have time to have a fellowship time with their kids. Parents has important role at home. The environment at home will influence the kids to have a tendency to what they do outside. If they commonly views their parents beating, fighting, using abusive language, etc, it will make them to do the same thing to others at play or in school. It happens because they learn from what they see on what their parents do. Finally, as a parent, we must realize that our kids are our future, so we must take care of them in maximum effort by giving them our time to play with them, our affection and our attention.
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