eldest daughter of Michael and Carole Middleton.After graduating, she worked in retail and then as an accessories buyer at her parent's business.
A lunchtime reception was held at Buckingham Place.It was a private gathering for guests who represent the couple's officials and private lives.People from
all over the world were invited for this ceremony.A Special wedding cake was made for this occasion.It was an eight-tiered traditional fruit cake decorated
with cream and white icing and 900 sugar paste flowers.The wedding was widely broadcast on television, internet and radio.The cost of the wedding reportedly
around 20 milion pounds.Prince William and Kate Middleton charitable gift fund was established which focuses on assisting charities such as the Newzealand
Earth Quake Appeal, Canadian Coast Guard Auxiliary etc.
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Wow! Very good essay and very good English! You seem like a very advanced student! I do have just a few corrections:
Capitalization:
1. Titles and names (even of Universities) should always be capitalized, such as:
Prince William (first sentence). I think you did use a capital letter most of the time for this. Also in the last sentence, The Prince William and Kate Middleton Charitable Gift Fund (the name of the fund).
2. Place names should be capitalized, such as: Westminster Abbey (first sentence), University of St. Andrews (2nd sentence), and last sentence, New Zealand (2 words).
3. Days of the week and months of the year are capitalized, such as: October (3rd sentence).
4. Do NOT capitalized regular words just to provide emphasis, such as: 5th sentence, "Prince William was graduated at St. Andrews University and he...pilot" (do not capitalize "he" or "pilot"). Also, in the sentence "A special wedding cake..." the word "special" should not be capitalized. If you want to show emphasis you might use italics or bold.
Punctuation:
There should be a space after ending sentence punctuation. This space was often left out.
Keep up the good work!
Hi, Prads.
Here is my correction of your writing:
Royal wedding The royal wedding between Prince William and Kate Middleton took place on Friday 29th July 2011 at westminister Westminster abbey in London. They first met while were studying when studying at the university of St Andrews in 2001. They were engaged in october 2010 while on private holiday in Kenya. Prince William is the elder son of Prince Charles and Diana. Prince William was graduated at St Andrews University and He later transferred to the RAF and went on to become a full-time Pilot. Kate Middleton is the eldest daughter of Michael and Carole Middleton. After graduating, she worked in retail and then as an accessories buyer at her parent's Parents’ business.
A lunchtime reception was held at Buckingham Place. It was a private gathering for guests who represent the couple's officials and private lives. People from
all over the world were invited for this ceremony. A Special wedding cake was made for this occasion. It was an eight-tiered layered traditional fruit cake decorated
with cream and white icing and 900 sugar paste flowers. The wedding was widely broadcast broadcasted on television, internet and radio. The cost of the wedding wedding was reportedly around 20 milion pounds. Prince William and Kate Middleton charitable gift fund was established which focuses on assisting charities such as the New Zealand
Earth Quake Appeal, Canadian Coast Guard Auxiliary etc.
also, I think that you should have an introduction and conclusion for the essay, and organize your essay clearer
For example, the 1st idea: How Prince and Kate knew each other
2nd idea: Their career after graduating
3st: How they prepared for the wedding: cake, guests.
Thank you for your post. Hope to see your next post.