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Posted by A dream on March 13, 2013

New year of Persia 

Have you ever heard about (NOWROUZ)

if you have not heard about it please read this text ,"NOWROUZ" is a persain word which means new day ,we call new year like this .every year the people from more than 11 countries celebrate nowrouz .the countries like :Iran ,  Azerbaijan,  Afghanistan , Tajikistan ,Turkmenistan ,Turkey ,Kyrgyzstan , Kazakhstan , Uzbekistan , Pakistan ,and Kurdistan of Iraq.

Iranian people celebrate new year at the first day of spring which is( 21st -march ) from 2500 years ago because they believe they believe that earth wins against the coldness that has been brought by devil and bad Energy in the world and second reason comes up from Zoroastrianism (the ancient religion of Iran ) because  of worth and valuable of nature  ,they celebrate and dance with coming spring and trees and flowers .

"NEWROUZ"has recorded as most ancient carnival in UN General Assembly .

and as Common heritage of mankind in 2009  . and 21 march has known as international day of (NOWROUZ) as suggestion of Azerbaijan (THANKS Azerbaijan:)  )

and by now more than 300 million people celebrate Nowrouz around the world .

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  • A B (Ameni) March 31, 2013 2:23
    Some tips:Use more full stops. Use capital letters to indicate a new sentence.
  • A B (Ameni) March 31, 2013 2:20
    New year of Persia
    Have you ever heard about NOWROUZ?If you have not heard about it please read this text. ,"NOWROUZ" is a persain word which means new day. We call this the new year. Every year, people from more than 11 countries celebrate Nowrouz :Iran , Azerbaijan, Afghanistan , Tajikistan ,Turkmenistan ,Turkey ,Kyrgyzstan , Kazakhstan , Uzbekistan , Pakistan ,and Kurdistan of Iraq.
    Iranian people have been celebrating new year on the first day of spring for the past 2500 years. They believe that the earth wins against the coldness brought into the world by a devil with bad energy. Another reason for this celebration comes up from Zoroastrianism (the ancient religion of Iran ). It reflects the respect and values of nature where people come to celebrate and dance the coming of spring in all its splendour.
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    • A dream March 13, 2013 8:58

      Hello Dear Kavin Kumar 

      Thanks a lot for ur help .and you show us that you use of your neighbor's net in good way too .

      thanks for ur comment  :)

    • A dream March 13, 2013 9:18

      HEY Nice man You are fallowing the best way :)

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