Hi there! Please let me know if there's something to correct or improve in the following lines:
Last weekend I woke up early in the morning very excited. I was going back to swimming lessons which I've been missing for the last 3 months. So I've got on my motorcycle and went to the club at the speed of light.
I've got there early, went to the "room" to get changed, and patiently waited for the lesson to begin.
As expected, it took less then 10 minutes for me to start filling like was dying. That's because I spent too much time out of the pool and wasn't being able to have the same performance as usual. Each stroke felt like running a mile. I had to stop every now and then to catch my breath.
But I like swimming a lot and even though I as dragging myself through the water I've been able to survive the 50 minutes class.
Hopefully I'll perform better next time.
Thank you for your time!
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Hi Cuong, thanks for the corrections
by " ...even though, as dragging myself through..." I meant "...even though, I was dragging myself though..." (I'm sure there's a better way to say this)
Also, I meant that I was able to survive for the while lesson, which took 50 minutes. How could I have made that clearer?
Thanks again!
Hi Maribel, you're correct on your comments, all of them make sense!
Thanks for the help!