ESL Discussion

Dear all, I need your opinion about my first article. Thank you so much.

Perth is the capital city of Western Australia and one of the most attractive cities in the world. It is great whether you are on holiday, just walking around after work or just chilling out. There are many things that you can see and do in Perth.

The city of Perth has many shops to attract shoppers, a variety of places from branded clothes of David Jones to good deals of Target or Big W.  Also you can buy electronics, home appliances  produce of Harvey Norman such as Ipads, Ipods, Iphones, kitchen set, coffee machines etc. Or just window shopping  along Murray Street and Barrack Street.

Perth has many places to visit, from old to modern. For instance you can see the Swan Bell Tower, Perth Town Hall and London Court. Also you can visit Perth Mint to  see the  biggest gold coin in the world and gold bars from all over the world include from Indonesia. If you like parks and gardens, you can visit Kings Park, Langley Park, Victoria Gardens, Supreme Court Gardens  and  Queen Gardens. There are also museums which takes us back to many years ago to the origin of the Australian ancient.  Or there are many  unique animals on display such as marine life and beautiful butterflies from all over the world. The Art Gallery of Western Australia is well known for fantastic collection of Indigenous Art Work. There is no entry fee to visit those museums, just a gold coin donation ( 2 dollar coin).

Perth has an array of fabulous annual festivals. There are local and international  musicals, ballets and operas. Besides you can go to Burswood Entertainment Complex which has plenty of facilities but  expensive. For example the casino, restaurants, bars, a golf course, a night club etc.  Or you can go to food courts which offer Thai, Indian, Chinese, Japanese , Vietnamese  cuisines at reasonable price. Then when you miss Indonesian food, there are some Indonesian restaurants such as Indonesia Indah, Tasik Indonesia, Sparrow etc.

This short article would give you some thought of various things to see and do when you come to Perth.  To me Perth is a beautiful, clean , peace and safe city.