0 Is it a right sentence? Is it possible to say so? Posted by Roksolana on March 21, 2016 in English HELP Endless circle … Spiral of Earth time closed ( or locked or another word should be used here?) Thanks in advance Views: 28 You need to be a member of MyEnglishClub to add comments! Join MyEnglishClub ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ Votes: 0 Email me when people reply – Follow
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In this kind of stream of consciousness writing who can say what is right or wrong?
I've written some previous sentences. Correct me if u can, please
- Will I live after death? Again Lola? The same? How terrible,- she said with a sigh. – But it’s senseless.
- Who said your life had sense?
In the blink of an eye the angel transformed into a sad person.
- Endless circle … Spiral of Earth time has closed.
Paying no attention to Lola, the angel kept walking, repeating to himself :
- DNA spiral. Solar system moved on a spiral… Spiral galaxy… The same signs sprang up on every side.
"Endless circle" makes some sense and is understandable.
"Spiral of Earth time closed" - I don't understand...
What are you trying to say? Please put it in context.