By advencing technology, human life absolutely changed. Maybe modern technology made the life easier for us but we lost some important values. I can say that there are advantages and disadvantages of both past and present ,so we must take advantages of present and protect advantages of past in the life.
I agree partly with that modern technology make life more convenient. As examples; washing machine is the good that make life easier for housewives, people save their memories with photographers or video cameras, the most important invention in modern age -computers are used on many areas to make solution easier. There are many modern tools like these examples making life better for us but it matters according to use of it. Sometimes people could get harm by modern tools if they don't be careful on use of it. For example, computers are dangerous and waste of time when they are not used carefully. So that, the most useful tool would convert to the most harmful tool.
In modern age, we stopped our many habits even traditional ones. For Muslims in eids, visiting our elders is a great action. But slowly new generation loses that special habit. We humans are social creatures so must live together and communicate. Technology made communication easier for us. In spite of this, people waste their time with technology and this situation makes us antisocial. There are many killers of time in modern tools. Even we forget everything in life, only focus on these kind of things. Even old social games left their places to antisocial computer games. Change of habits and traditional actions disturbs old people but young people are not disturbed about this situation.
Advancing age caused change of world system and the most important reason of this is improving of technology. Money became more valuable for us, even we started to care money more than their emotions. Weapons are manufactured to kill more people and earn. People use technology to earn more on everything. Watching sad events on news got simple for us anymore. After all these, I can say that bad people use technology better than good people or technology makes us evil day by day.
People have to live in conditions of their age because advencing and changing age is an obligatory. For all these reasons, in that technology age we must know to live in a good way. Even we must save our good habits from past and convert them to modern age. We must search for history to learn our faults in past. In conclusion, good life can exist in every time, just learn to live so.
Note: May you correct my faults in paragraphs or give your ideas ?
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Yes, there is technology for someones to make money, not for us..you are on the true point.i completely agree with you!
i dont think it is out of the context..even you explained my feelings more than i did..especially that i wanna live in ancient days like you do :) beside all these, i just dont agree with that bookworms are also antisocial.Probably bookworms would be the most social people in the society bcuz they will have many topics to talk about, at least i think so..
I will be waiting for your comments and discussions...thanks for your support
"edged weapon" is the best expression about modern tools..But it is not an obligatory to keep us alive
Thank you for your great help Mariam.i didnt think before i have rich vocabulary :)
My opinion was not stated in a clear way bcuz the question is not really clear..I mean i couldnt focus on only one point.
could you tell me what can i change "advencing" with? really i felt it is mistaken but i couldnt find any other word to use instead of it.And could you suggest me better phrases instead of bad ones ?
In spite of all mistakes, you gave me a good point...thanks xD
And i wanna share with you that link even probably you know and i saw it yesterday:
http://community.vdict.com/showthread.php?t=7
thanks for your great comment...i agree wth you, demand is the most important factor on this...i think technology sometimes takes our good sides from us so we mustn't allow to take them from us