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Hello everyone!!! 

I am back after longtime -hope anyone here still remember me, lol-. The blog below is written by two of my students that like writing stories. The bold font is written by a boy and the italic ones by a girl, both are 10 years old. They are so different yet they can work together to finish this story. I did some editing of their unique hand-writing. Hope you can enjoy the story. please ignore the un-understood words. Cheers!!   

There was a man named Zamos. He is a “psycho” and killed his own village people. Then he went to the woods to talk in hands like TT WO. After that, he went to a city to kill Captain America. Why because he wanted to see him root to death with fire. Then suddenly DC superheroes came to the rescue. “What the …” he said. Then everyone died because Zamos was stronger than every DC and Marvel Superheroes. Oh yeah, he killed everyone in the universe then he ate a lot of food. Well, because he sad that he killed everyone in the universe and he was all alone and didn’t have friends. And then he created creatures with God-like powers. They were ugly but they were friendly to him, not the gods, the gods died then. After that he did something crazy like Super-duper extra crazy that was helping mortals aka new humans with extreme smartness and strength then he said “why did I do all of this” then he became evil again. Then he ate 666 devils and imprisoned them to hell then he went on a diet because he was all fatty fat like a pig. Then he ran every day so temper day and become God of speed then he died of running too hard every day. But then, when he died he became a vampire. Then, he died of constipation and then he died happily ever after.

The End :) (yes they did put smile in the end)