I am sitting dumb and numb, with a blank paper before me, just your name written on it. Staring at your name. The life seems confined in it. It seems like a confused poem, or words, are stuck, want to come out, but can’t set on the paper, floating in the air like stars or butterflies. I am looking at your name written on the paper and thinking the poem has completed, there will be no better poem than this.
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Thanks Onee. Good to see you after a long time.
Undescribable feeling. :)
I like it, Sir.
I hope so. Thanks
Glosky
I hope now your is at ease how to express your feeling even when they are stuck.
Thanks.
Hi mishaikh. Its been a long time. I can feel what you are feeling when you wrote this piece. It happened to me, staring at the name of my beloved but i cant write what my heart is saying at that moment. Seems like the world stopped and only my heart is pumping and aching and the same time.
What do you think usrariasat ?
Is it real feelings or just your imaginatios?
by the way as always good piece of writing.
@saba Yes indeed. Thanks for your time to visit me. It has always been a pleasure to see you around.
Nice poem and nice comments.
Thanks @Elf Noor. It is good to see you after a long time.