Your Loyal Wife
Stolen sweet thoughts, miserable weird mood,
on the table your keys, in the fridge your food.
Clocks is ticking backwards but life goes on,
things will never be the same when you are gone.
Your smell is still around, your shadow next to me,
our future is just past, nothing was meant to be.
My tears lost salty taste, reality is forever blurred,
Why those bad ones are always happy and nice are hurt?
Only warm shower can wash away all my sorrow,
"Relax, girl, there is new beginning, new tomorrow!"
Then in the mirror I see strange face without life,
this devastated woman is me - your loyal wife.
P.S. It has nothing to do with my real life, it is just my fantasy :-)
Comments
very nice.. thanks for sharing. Luci... I'll wait for your new poem
oh my dear ! it a lovely poem ! so i like it , it's fantastic it's marvellous !
legend of love, thank you for your nice words :-) I appreciate it.
Dimi, thanx for liking it, m kinda punctual as for rhyme :-D m glad you noticed it. I hope she will find her prince since her husband left her ;-)
Lady Lady, of course that bad one can be either man or woman, here I decided to make a victim of woman :-D Love is a big risk and no one knows, if their love story will be eventually "succesful" or not :-p thanx for your comment, dear :-)
So the bad one was the husband. I think if this loyal wife knew that her life would turn into this, she could have rejected her man long before she got hook on to him. But who knows what will happen in the future?
What a poor plight but this is so true with many of our women today. Life is really a big gamble, isn't it?
Really nice dear luci :) I think u have a talent my friend in poem:)
don't hurt, thanx for comment and you know what? Firstly it was longer and there was one more paragraph that explained it clearly but I wanted to make it more as quiz :-D poets are like this nah? they let us torture and force us to think what the poem was about...
maya, yeah but it is not only about men, I don't wanna say here that women are saint :-D anyway, as you have said, it is about using oportunity and some people simply can't control themself...
indila... thanx for liking the last line :-D btw some find it not so morbid, you like it, one hundred ppl, one hundred opinions... thanx for reading it ;-)
Nick, thank youuuuuu, maybe my poems will change your opinion :-D ok hardly believe it but wouldn't it be nice :-D
Jess, it all is about trust and loyality, yeah, thanx for your comment ;-)
Leo, thanx for wonderful comment :-D you narcisist!!! and btw I don't wanna make cheaters only from men here, it is equal battel, nah? and yeah my poetic side might kill!!! :-D
Ratu, looool m sorry for not killing this woman :-D wasn't in such mood to kill, next time :-p
Its all about your children/child that bonds spouses together, and with trust,respect, and open mindedness of the couple,.going together and playing with your children are those unprizely compliment moments that brings shine all days of a happy life.
i suck at poetry and stuff....but i think yours is the nice one, luci...
good job..:)
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