You love someone else

You love someone else


Your moisty ticklish whisper near my ear
The dim, the slow, the low unheard of your voice i hear
As near as I could smell your dissolved scent in air
While struggle to pay attention with these distractions
Couldn't hear clearly but i know what you wanted to say,
You wanted to say that ' you love someone else 

"nemat"

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  • Keep writing! You are talented in using words. I enjoyed reading the short story like a poem. It shows it doesn't need many words to catch the attention of readers.

  • So sad

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  • Write more!

  •      At first hint  , these poetic words are so wonderful  , because  the describe  the happiness of lovers closeness  , and I can say that u have really picked ur words right 

              However   , the end is shocking and unexpected  , it's  bears  the bad news of the final day of love  . I enjoyed reading ur blog  . Let's  read more from u :) 

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