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The tear stuck in my eye is you

Which has blurred my vision is you

Who stole my sleeps is you

Who burns my emotion is you

Whose memory pinches me is you

You are not aware how I was looted by you.

Many pages of life I have turned, unaware, is you and you,

How thorns of memories pinned my soul not aware is you only you

Who cannot feel my pain is you

Unaware of my suffering is you

Who has lost his heart, is me, not you

How deep I was in love, not knowing, is you

Many fables related to you because of me

Many dawns will remember me

Many dusks are now memento

But now who turned away, is you

I gathered the memories who scattered them, is you.

In collecting all, it takes years so as changed my moments

This has become my habit remembering you, you and you.

Which bring tears in my eyes, how delicate the love is

I realized after meeting you

The rustle of the wind makes me feel as you have come,

When I turn to see, there is the rustling mere

The tear., stuck in my eyes, blurring my vision, is YOU.

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Mishaikh April 6, 2019 23:37

Thanks bet a lot.
bet April 4, 2019 21:15

The rustle of the wind.....wooooo
Mishaikh April 1, 2019 18:09

Thanks saba, I am glad you like it.
saba April 1, 2019 14:04

Very nice poem, Mishaikh! Thanks for sharing.
Mishaikh March 28, 2019 15:04

Thanks O.M. for further explanation.

I appreciate your comments a lot.
O. M. March 28, 2019 14:59

Hi, Mishaikh )))

Nice words, though full of pain. I'd like to add to Rose's words.

When love hurts...maybe it is not unconditional love. I have read not so far that it is not love that hurts us. it is the needs of our ego to blame someone for our pain. Our happiness must be somewhere inside of us. We have to learn how to be complete and let people go without being attached to them. (The words, as I said, are not mine)...I just wonder how if it is possible when you are in love...and where is the boundary between our love and our ego ))

Thanks for sharing ))
Mishaikh March 28, 2019 14:41

Thanks Uncle for your encouragement.
Mishaikh March 28, 2019 14:41

Very well defined Kavita Sharma

Thanks for all your appreciation.
Kavita Sharma March 28, 2019 8:19

When you are in deep love and abruptly something happened which you have never imagined, tears you mentally and emotionally into pieces , take you into extreme pain. It can be clearly seen in this poem . Wish you have a better life ahead.
Mishaikh March 27, 2019 19:04

"Then, there is no us, there exist only you and me."

This is the bottom line Rose. Thanks for being so considerate.

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