YES! you adore me too.....

I am possessed for you.....

Emphasize me to contemplate that ...........

Yes, You adore me too.....

Likewise

In dimness Moon shines.....

It seems that Moon loves dimness........

And he comes to dismiss those dimness...

Through his splashing light.....

Emphasize me to contemplate that......

Yes, You adore me too......

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  • Okay Anum I have some questions for you so that you might help me to understand.  You say......I am possessed for you...…..what are you possessed with???  Could you mean I am possessed by you or with you???  Who is the you that you are speaking of?  I am not sure if you are saying I likewise adore you or if you are using "likewise" in comparing that adoration to the moon and it's dimness taken away by it's splashing light......what seems to be.....isn't.  It is cloudy Anum…..not clear......as far as I am concerned it needs more.....I did try to write it below......but I still feel it is not clear.  If I am misunderstanding I am sorry, but I am confused.  I like Mishaikh feel it is a valiant try, and please continue to try.....if I can help you in anyway......I would be happy to try.  Thank you for sharing......writing is a wonderful profession or hobby.  Have a great day!!!!!

    I am possessed by you

    Emphasize my contemplation of that

    Yes, you adore me

    Likewise as I do you

    In dimness the Moon shines

    It seems to love dimness

    Yet, it comes to dismiss that dimness

    Through it's splashing light

    Emphasize my contemplation of that

    Yes, You adore me too

  • thanks Mishaikh :)

  • Good attempt Anum.  Keep it up.

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