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  • bet May 5, 2014 4:30

    Thanks a lot for doing correction!

  • Tara Benwell May 1, 2014 16:20

    Great story! Thanks for participating. 

    Tip: The comma should be a full stop (period). Or, you could use a semicolon and change the second "Someone" to lowercase: 

    Someone has more; someone has nothing!

  • Lady Anne April 30, 2014 13:17

    Yeah, that's the paradox of life!  

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