This blog is written based on kenshin's "unfinished sentence" challenge

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    Eight months have passed and we are preparing to welcome a child once again... The feelings that I have was totally different from the last time. Maybe because I felt an  intense life growing inside me. It will be a happy little boy, a handsome boy, a brave  boy, a boy full of love and compassion. He would look like his father, with the same  gentleness and patience.... My wandering thoughts and feelings suddenly awakened  by  the sound of laughter of an angel from outside...

The door opened, my husband  with  our adorable little angel on his arm with a  bouquet of  grapehyacinths that I love.
They smiled at me. The little angel comes in my lap. She likes listening to the sound and feel the action of her brother in my tummy. My husband gently  puts his arms around me and whispers to me "the doctor said everything was fine, maybe a few more days ..."

I feel peaceful and warm …!

... Someone was calling me, the sound was echoed like relfection of that sound in the valley. A magical light was shining in the sky, it's so radiant! I was running on the meadow of grapehyacinths, let my long hair flied with the wind. I was trying to take as much fresh air as possible into my lung. I lied down on the soft grass and smiled while I was seeing the bright sky. My boy was running around me while laughing, his voice was echoed on the flower fields. He was trying to climb up on my body and hold me. I looked at his eyes, such an angel's eyes!

   Over there, my love with our lovely daughter was also running, she was perched on his shoulder and he was holding her,they were laughing, they looked so funny and happy...! She was calling me so soft " mom....mommy..."

Sudently everything went quiet, the sky became dark, black. I heard other sound that touches to my soul " come on darling....come on my love..!" I woke up and was sweating much, I realised my husband was trying to wake me up... I just had a dream. They were my children in the sweet dream. Imediatly I put my hands on my tummy as my nature instinct, find a beating heart! A tear dropped over my cheek. I was really worried, strange feeling like I lost something, I couldn't figure out what it was.

  The day passed over slowly,the last sunshine was trying to shine for the last time through the window. I fell asleep deeply in the evening...

   Excruciating pain started grow and getting more frequently, i screamed loudly and then everything went dark…

   Tears were running on my husband tired face. The doctor came near him and said " your wife is fine and your handsome boy is the pink of health. Congratulations!" The doctor cradled my husband tightly. Let him cried like a baby should cried. " Thank you so much, Thanks God for blessing us!" My husband said. He carried our little daughter in his arms, she was sleeping off on the sofa, and went with the doctor.

 His life is in front of him...

    The room is brightly lighted and woke me up after long road. My baby boy is sleeping in my arm. His pert nose is so nice, his small fingers are trying to hold something tight. " oh my brave baby!" I look at him, speechless,he smiles at me while he is sleeping... I'm so happy and softly kiss his cheek.

   Still be there, a bouquet of grapehyacinths... Somehow,they seems are blooming and brighter than before!

( Thanks a lot for my best friends )

 

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  • 2386639705?profile=originalDear Lucy!

    You comment is so nice...and your flowers are pretty ... I love it very much!

  • I love it! as you describe their wonderful miracle that is your new son, wow excellent.
    By the way, congratulations for this beautiful little boy.

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  • Dear Grappey

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  • Tara Benwell: I thought i should finish this story!

  • Noaslpls...thank you so much! You always encourage me ...a soft kiss to you dear sis!
    Mickey...you are such a cute girl and again i have to say thanks for your kindness!
    Kenshin...oooops....(^_^)....!!!
    Tara Benwell...Thanks alot for your nice comment and your correction!
  • Ooh, grape hyacinths! I love these. When my babies were little I used to pull these out of our garden and stick these between their toes. It fascinated them. Thanks for continuing the story. Do you think someone will continue it?

    Writing tip: Check your title of this blog. There are two spelling errors. 

  • hehehe~ Loving mom~

  • Finally. Love it.

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