Oh dear, you might be thinking that I have left you, may be assuming that I am so out of etiquette even didn’t bother to intimate you to abstaining from coming online. This is not the case. I fell ill. Just came back from my family physician. He suggested that I should tell a loved one about my sickness, and I have no loved ones but you my love, so the first thing I am doing after returning home, sitting before laptop and write to you. My physician said it was advisable that I rest at least one week and stay away from any emotional activities so that my heart could get a rest. He also advised me to stay away from all work strain. So dear, I am happy that I will be able to have more time with you than before, (ignoring the advice of not risking the emotional upheaval) because my heart gets out of control when I am near you. He requested that I eat regularly (which is against the rule of ‘love’), he said, “eat whenever desire, but essentially not to eat ‘sadness’ and be happy.” And my happiness is to be with you. So I advised myself to keep myself close to you and stop staying away from internet. One thing which I like of my physician that he insisted me to talk about my heart condition with my family, and my family is you because I have no one but you. I wish you were closer and I wish I were healthier.
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That is very kind of you Anne. The errors were rightly pointed out. Silly of my, because I know the rule.
Dear Mishaikh,
What a nice way of abusing your health, hahaha (Joke!)
Actually, communicating with someone who is very close to you is kind of therapeutic, more effective than taking medicines. Sweet words is like a soothing balm to our hearts, like a mint that is refreshing to our mouth. I understand why you chose to go against your doctor's prescription.
Well, love is a many spendored things. Who knows what this feeling can do to regain your health back. Don't worry, modern gadgets can always bring you closer to each other.
For my correction:
When changing a direct discourse to an indirect discourse, the tenses should always be in the past.
..My physician said that it is was advisable that I should rest at least one week and stay away from any emotional activities so that my heart could get a rest.
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For clarification about my correction, please feel free to write me, Mishaikh!
Thank Dr. and Anah,
Saba you do not seem to fall in love ever.
Sigh!
It's always healthier to talk to someone who is much closer to your heart, someone who hears the unheard and sees the unseen. Someone who is always there for you when everyone leaves.
Amazingly written! :)
Nice blog, thanks for sharing. If I were in your position, I shut down my laptop right now and rest for one week :D
Thanks, Ratu you like it.
great blog...!!! you wrote very nicely.
thanks for sharing..
O my o my...Mishaikh you always got the idea to write a nice blog, I envy you for this
Onee thanks for comments, I just smiled, but my heart felt great pleasure on your remarks.
ES I really appreciate your guidance. Thanks a lot. I will keep in mind.
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