Writing Prompt ~ Nosy Neighbour
Hardly ever my neighbours are at home. They always go out at weekdays, I suppose to work on. I see they ask their friends out to go to their homes seldom. When there are kids in the neighbour's houses they often are screaming in some cheerful birthday. Infrequently, they play at the garden or at the sidewalk, maybe its parents have fear something bad to happen with them if they are out of the parent's houses security. Ocasionally, the parents stop doing what they are doing to play gladly with their children . The parties or birthdays in my neighbourhood constantly finish in an early time, because there are rules to not disturb the elderly persons that live at my street. My neighbours say hello to me very rarely.
Note: Comments, suggestions and mainly corrections are wished so that I can check my perform out that activity. Thank you all for taking your time for this!
Comments
Ok, teacher!
Hi Daniel,
It's great to see you trying the writing prompts! Be sure to read the resources before you attempt the challenges. You will find some helpful hints. One thing you need to review is the location of the adverbs. You can do that here and here.
Also, I recommend that you don't put words in brackets like this. Brackets are for extra information, not essential information. You could just use bold text.
Keep up the practice!
Thanks for thel comments and suggestions!
Nice different style of writing blog you adopted.
thanks you gave us nice words to learn.
Thanks for sharing :)
Hi,
you know ,I didn't get what was your meaning exactly.
Are your neighbours good or bad? according ur writing I think they are good people .
because they were careful that they don't disturb .
any way I am a leaner like you.
be successful
I'm still an English learner, but I think most of your sentences in here are written a bit 'strange' term of structure. For example "My neighbours are at home (hardly ever)". Normally I will write it as 'My neighbours are hardly ever at home'.