A visit to the old, historical, fascinating museum was a horrible experience for me and my friend Jade. Jade was my compatible friend so I asked him out to come along with me. We shared the expense and reached the old museum by a double story bus. Just in one hour we reached our destination easily.The amazing journey didn't took so long to finish. But the roots which the rude driver took were terrible. For an instance we started to doubt on the driver, if he wanted to kidnap us. But soon the horrible feelings of being kidnapped, vanished and we breathe the fresh air of freedom and reached our place safely. People of the Town seemed weird. One of the malicious looking guy took us to the museum gate. Maybe, we seemed gullible to him that's why he tried to take more rent for his junk ride. Peoples' attitude was not ignorable at all but, we tried our best and became flexible. Sign boards of different sizes outside the museum were fascinating and sensibly written. An astonishing feeling chilled us, as soon as we entered the museum slowly. The environment of the huge museum was not digestible for us. There was something mysterious in the museum. The expensive, historical ornaments, ancient paintings, swords of famous warriors and other disparate things were not placed properly in the shelves. Everything was tangible and easily accessible. It was weird and pleasant at the same time to be in a museum where no rules or restrictions were applicable. Jade become irresistible when he read, "VISITORS CAN TAKE BOOKS ALONG WITH THEM" on a sign board hung next to the shelves of old, torn and informative books of famous ancient authors. I was sure that there is something weird but Jade turned a deaf ear to my cautious advice. As soon as Jade held the books in his hands the yellow light of the museum turned into red and a terrific noisy alarm sound made us frightened. The smooth floor started to shake up badly. It seemed a horrible earthquake which made us to run for our life. We left the museum as fast as we could and felt ourselves numbed. We don't know how we reached back to our relaxing and comfortable place but, we thanked God for saving us from the horrible museum which made us historical as well.
I am ready for the mistakes and corrections :D
You can find words ending with -ible or -able, do you know why I used those words so frequently? Oh, its because I wrote it for Writing Prompt ~ -ible or -able? But then I realized I can add some adjectives in it and why not make it Expector's challenge. (I don't know if I did right or not I just made it little fascinating and shared)
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well done Anah , you write terrible but nice story.
I didn't find mistakes but i learn 4 or 5 adj :))))
Thanks Anah
There is a interesting and bit informatics story shared by you. Very thanks!!
Thanks for admiring friends!
Expector Sir, now I know. Thanks for the correction!
nice story
Nice story and narrated in nicer way.
The fonts used by your friends in comments are more visible (easy to read) then the fonts of your blog. Hope you will take care next time.
@Anah
The adjective "fascinating" in your first sentence is used to express your opinion about the museum, so the right adjective order should be "a fascinating old historical museum". Hope you get it!
hahaha Noa the museum was located in Fascinating, Imaginary World :P
Yea Pix it really sounds like an adventures movie scene( like Lara Croft Tomb Rider) :P Yep I missed friend after compatible..! thanks for drawing my attention towards it!
Afro, thanks for stopping by dear. Yea I was not sure about the spelling thanks!
hahah Luci thanks a bunch for correcting some errors and suggestions. Well no I wanted to say Jade was my compatible friend!! :D I hope its not wrong!
Reeyaz, femina, Areal thanks for admiring and passing by! :)
Freedom come'on :D its an imaginary story :P I never went to such horrible museum in my life and with Jade? lol never I don't even know who is Jade how does he looks like :P haha thanks for stopping by dear!!! :D
Expector Sir, thanks for the link and I will practice on the errors.
nice story with beautiful use of words...