Dear Tim,
Your winter vacations have just started and I am sure you will have plenty of leisure time. I would like to advise you to take advantage of this free time and start reading a good book or try to read some random short stories. Reading something like fantasy/fiction could be very beneficial for you, as reading fiction will help you to build up your imagination skills. It can help you to improve your vocabulary too. Take advantage of this piece of advice. My teacher once gave me the same advice and it was really beneficial for me. I really feel proud of having such teacher who gave me a useful piece of advice. I want you to pay attention to my sincere advice and make your vacation more enjoyable.
Your friend, Anah
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Komala dear thanks for stopping by. :))
Seeker thanks for passing by. :)
Anah, thanks for this piece of advice.. Right now we are on vocational in my country and I am going to take your piece of advice into consideration.
Nice blog!!!
hahhaahh Rusty :D I can see how lazy you are. :D Thanks for the appreciation.
Noa, Afro thanks for admiring dearies. :)
Yes, we should follow your advice.
A good advice. :D :D
Luci dear I really mean it and come on you can't make mistake :D I'm sure about it.
Anele dear thanks for the correction. I think I need more time to learn how to connect two sentences accurately.
Tara dear thanks for passing by. :))
I'm feeling myself so lucky for having such amazing teachers in my life.
Awesome! And thanks Anele for spotting the punctuation error. Great teamwork!
Well done Annah. I found no grammatical errors. I just want you to take note of something. Take a look at the following sentence:
My teacher once gave me the same advice and it was really beneficial for me, I really feel proud of having such teacher who gave me a useful piece of advice.
You made this as one long sentence where you can make it into two. Replace the comma with a period while the rest is another sentence. I've already underlined the first sentence.
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