Writing challenge#11 A day in life of a tree on the beach

Alone in the seaside, still since ages. Many people passed by me . I had known a lot of secrets. I'm the old tree and the only one in this wide beach. I wish I could have very, very long legs in order to leave this place and to move away from this beach. I remembered that singer who sang a very long sad song which is full of melancholy. I don't know where he is now. He sat under my shadow then went. One day, very old day, a group of pirates had sit under my shadow , talked about a treasure map and where they could find it. No one knows if they found the treasure or not. Very nice teenagers sat under my shadow, I guessed 15 years ago. A girl and a boy their hands were crossed and they were looking to each other with eyes full of love. He whispered in her ears" I'll be for you and I'll not leave you". Today these teens become older they met again under my shadow by chance. She has three children now. when he passed in front of her he looked at her and said to himself:" where I saw this dumb woman?" and who is the dumb man who married her?" She looked at him and said to her self" I think I saw this face before but I didn't know where? I don't know which kind of women can marry him .How much he's an ugly one? The tree smiled because this man didn't know and this woman didn't know .She just knows. She sighed and didn't know why she remembered the old song of that singer!This picture from herehttp://www.flickr.com/photos/insashi/3438400374/

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kamel Adas November 15, 2009 13:35

Thanks a lot for your kind words.Have a great time.
Kamel
Tai Ngo Tu November 15, 2009 11:34

your story is so exciting to read. J read it many times.have great time
kamel Adas October 11, 2009 18:24

I think you'll write better story.Thanks a lot for your kind words.Have a great time.
kamel Adas October 7, 2009 19:36

Thanks for your kind words Tran.Have a good day.
TranTrang October 5, 2009 16:14

what a nice story! it imprint on me.
kamel Adas October 2, 2009 11:39

Hi Juan,
Thanks for your encouraging words.you don't know how much you make me happy while i'm reading your comment.Try to write a story and i'm sure it'll be better than my story.Have a great day.
Kamel
kamel Adas October 2, 2009 11:37

Hi Abinash,
You're welcome and thanks for your kind words.
Kamel
kamel Adas October 2, 2009 11:35

Hi Emilie,

Thanks for this nice comment and glad you like it.I sometimes dream to have a place like this too.To stay under such a nice tree and think about this life..
So long
Kamel
juan carlo luna October 2, 2009 11:17

what a wonderful story!! i dont believe that your not good in grammar when in fact you are very good at it.. how i wish i could also write such good story like the lonely tree.. keep it up =)
Emilie October 1, 2009 16:07

Hello Kamel:
It is a very lovely story...I like beach..Is this tree a real one? It has a special place there..I wish I can go there to tell the tree my secrets too...Thanks alot Kamel..It is an intersting story and I like the sea very much ..So all the things and topics about it will be very intersting ones to me..Have a nice day Kamel..
Emilie

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