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Writing Challenge: Terrifying Two-Line Tales 1

Posted by ELF-Noor on October 29, 2015

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Elsa entered into the room at night time for searching her notes, but as she moved toward the switch Board for turn on the light, she felt someone Hand there. She yelped and start crying. Her Brother start laughing at her.. that was her brother, who terrified her...:@@@

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MARY October 30, 2015 21:59

Oh I like to do that... It's very funny to scare people! *evil grin*
Cute story ELF Noor

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ELF-Noor October 30, 2015 16:44

Dear Tara Benwell .. :) many many thanks for appreciating..BTW Title of Story should be scary...;)

I am really glad to have your comment.

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Tara Benwell October 30, 2015 14:19

Those brothers! I love the title of your story. It scared me before I started reading.
ELF-Noor October 30, 2015 12:26

#Elen.. :) so nice..

#Onee-chan.. so you took benefit of beings elder sister...!!

#Expector Smith and Seeker thanks for your comment... !!

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Expector Smith October 29, 2015 23:10

That was scary!
Onee-chan October 29, 2015 14:28

When my younger brother was still kid, I was the one who teased him all night when he wanted to sleep. :D Thanks for sharing. It reminds me that moment. :)
Elen October 29, 2015 13:24

Haha, my brother also did this to me. I socked!
ELF-Noor October 29, 2015 10:06

#Dear Lady Noor.. it's just like my true story.. but his way of terrifying me is different..')

#Behrad When I try to make him scare but he don't scares.. he just smile.
ELF-Noor October 29, 2015 9:49

#Dear Alice E. : )

#Dear noaslpls lol..I love siblings relationship.. they fight,scares whatever they do.. but they are connected by their heart..

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Behrad October 29, 2015 7:41

Elf, if I were you I would try to do something in return :D planning for a vendetta! but I know you are too kind to do that!

well done...