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Writing Challenge: Terrifying Two-Line Tales

Posted by Expector Smith on October 28, 2015

A python in the toilet bowl

Emily woke up to the alarm and rushed to the bathroom, but, hardly had she lifted the toilet lid when she saw a python flicking its tongue in the toilet bowl...

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Expector Smith October 31, 2015 0:44

Hi MARY,

Yes, I heard it happened in Southeast Asia.

Thanks!
MARY October 30, 2015 18:18

Oh I know a real story like this one happened once in a place in Bangkok :)

I can imagine the python's version; something like: "The other day I was resting all comfy in a new place and suddenly, a crazy lady showed up and screamed at my poor python's face... I was this close to have a heart attack!" :D
Tara Benwell October 30, 2015 14:26

Oooh, you did it in one line. Great story!
Expector Smith October 30, 2015 13:09

Thanks Seeker!
Expector Smith October 29, 2015 23:06

Thank you Behrad, Elen, Evangelina, Onee!

Yes, it seems our members really enjoyed the writing challenge. Enjoy and have fun!
Onee-chan October 29, 2015 14:55

Hooooo.....I often think of this.....then think...ah, it's only in the movie. :D

I may be fainted before it bites me. :D
Elen October 29, 2015 13:11

I am sure that Emily acted like this: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
Behrad October 29, 2015 10:46

Expestor.... if we experience what you said in your tale, then we will understand how much creepy can it be... we need some imagination to feel what you said... as I said: well done...
Expector Smith October 29, 2015 10:17

Thanks to noasl, Afro, Alice, Behrad!

Yes, for most of us, snakes can be so scary, but some people do keep snakes as pets. So, for those who love snakes, this story may not sound creepy.
Alice E. October 29, 2015 6:02

Snakes are way up there on top of my spine-chilling list so this story here is really giving me goosebumps! Thanks for the creepy share Expector! :)