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  • Dear Onee Chan, Thank you so much for correcting it for me. I really appreciate that. It's better now is in it.

  • She would think that she need blood, too. :p

    Adaline, let me help you to make it into two sentences if you don't mind. :)

    Sheila’s father is a surgeon who always works in the night shift. She is wondering why, but today he reveals his secret to her that he is a 'Vampire'.

    Better: Sheila is wondering why her father who is a surgeon always works in the night shift. Today he reveals his secret to her that he is a 'Vampire'.

  • Dear Tanjin & Setarah, Thank you so much for liking

  • Dear Noaslpls, It's true. Thanks for reading and comment. I appreciate that.

  • Dear Dara Gno, Thank you for reading and liking

  • Hmmm .. a surgeon Vampire... No wonder the hospital always in need of lots of blood bags when he was doing the surgeries. It was for him and not his patients. LOL

  • Akohomoda Adaline Bala, Ena vendum? I am afraid of Christoper Lee, Vincent Price and Peter Cushing. When I see them, I cannot sleep.

  • Yes Elen, I think so. Thanks for reading

  • Dear Afro, Yes he is!

    Thanks for reading sweet heart

  • That means that she is a Vampire too??? :o  So shocking for her!

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