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Writing Challenge: Terrifying Two-Line Tale: THE PUPPET

Posted by Alice E. on October 28, 2015

Kara dismissed the crazy old lady’s ominous warning against bringing the puppet home with her as it forebode a sinister curse for anyone who would come in contact with it.  Kara’s eyelids were heavy as she awakened the next day then a blood curdling cry arose from her throat as she saw that her whole body had turned into a puppet.

 THE GIFT

The shaman told the wealthy crippled man that two things could happen if you open the gift, one would be a dream come true and the other a transformation that could never be undone. Sprawled amidst the torn wrappings of the gift box was the wealthy man wailing at the sight of his moving and animated tentacles.

 

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  • Onee-chan October 29, 2015 15:36

    Hooo!!!!! So terrifying!! 

  • Behrad October 29, 2015 9:01

    You know, it attract me... good ideas Alice... well done...

  • Alice E. October 29, 2015 5:41

    @Seeker, Mishaikh, setareh, Expector:  Glad you all found it scary! :)

  • Alice E. October 29, 2015 5:39

    @Elen, Behrad,Adaline:  Sometimes what scares us can motivate us too!  Thanks for appreciating it! :)

  • Alice E. October 29, 2015 5:37

    @ noaslpls, @Afro:  Thanks for passing by.  I love to scare myself especially since it's Halloween season:)

  • Expector Smith October 28, 2015 23:08

    Wow! So scary!

  • setareh October 28, 2015 19:16

    Awsome, well done Alice. 

  • Elen October 28, 2015 12:27

    So creepy!

  • Behrad October 28, 2015 11:23

    oh... I can say GOOD JOB Alice!!!

  • Adaline Bala October 28, 2015 9:50

    Very well written, I like it.

    Scary!

    Thanks for sharing.

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