What a beautiful lake! One can see the reflection of blue sky and its clouds. I was touching its surface with my fingers and was stunned by the amazing scenery all around. It was like paradise. In the blink of an eye all I could see was a large alligator with its big mouth and sharp teeth; there was something between its teeth; it looked like a hand. Oh my God it was my hand! 

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  • setareh, it was exciting like your other blogs, good job.

  • Dear Tara, yeah you are right. I should have described every details of the most terrifying scene like the sharp teeth of the aligator and talking of so much pain and blood. That would be more scary. Thanks for your comment.
  • Dear Expector, I hope I didn't give you heart attack otherwise I have to stop writing scary stories.:D
  • Wow! Great story. I love the shocking ending. Unlike so many others, I don't want to challenge you to rewrite this in two words, because it seems just right like this. Sometimes it's okay to break the rules. ;)

  • Wow scary!

  • Dear Afro, are you shivering out of dear?:D
    Dear Elen, I am glad that finally I frightened one person.
    Dear Noor, hahaha I guess.
    Dear Saba, thanks for your comment.
  • Very scary, nature is beautiful but sometimes it is cruel.

  • :) Are you sure that was your hand..??  :@ be safe.. nice tale...

  • Setareh, you realized that it bit your hand without feeling any pain. Oh, my God, what are you? A zombie? That's scary!! :D :D

  • hihihihi

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