Ella was walking alone in a lonely, empty street after a night out when she heard something following her closely. Her heart began pumping, and then suddenly an arm touched her back and a voice said, "Excuse me, you dropped your bus pass."
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Hi my friend,anyway thank you from the gift..the story is too short,,but i enjoy it...again thank you so much,sorry for late reply
Dear Evangelina, Tanjin, Truong Thi Thanh truc, Lady Noor, Behard, Elen, Onee Chan & Rogue Thank you all so much for taking your time reading and liking. I really appreciate that.
Dear Mary, Thank you. I should add that as well is in it. But we got two lines restrictions.
"...and right after that, the guy disappeared in a cloud of smoke." :D
Cool story Adaline :)
Dear Behrad, Thank you for reading and comment.I appreciate that.
Dear Seeker, Thank you so much. I appreciate that.
Dear Onee Chan Thank you for reading and comment. I appreciate that.
Thank you for reading and comment Elen. I appreciate that
Dear Tara, Thank you so much. I will rewrite.
WOW! "Close Behind" is one of my favourites so far. It's amazing what you accomplished in three lines. Can you try to shorten it to two? It's a big challenge! (Please don't delete the three-line version, but try to add a two-line version below. Let me know if you need any help.)
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