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Writing Challenge: Terrifying Two-Line Tale

Posted by Onee-chan on October 29, 2015

"He" Was There

I really felt my neck was being kissed by someone behind when I was half-sleeping. To my surprise, my eyes were immediately opened and saw my cow doll that then I never put there anymore.

Note: No romantic comments. It was just scary for Jinn was there.

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Arif November 14, 2015 14:07

"which are your father's hand and kidnapper's hand." Very logical answer :D let me ponder over it lol. The way you had no idea of being kissed by cow doll or someone, similarly I failed to sense whether I was being kidnapped by father or someone else :).
Onee-chan November 14, 2015 13:59

Lol.....my dear brother Arif, you were too afraid and worry. You should have known which are your father's hand and kidnapper's hand. :D But, it was your alertness, so I guess you will not easily kidnapped by person. lol...

Thank you for sharing your experience and liking. :)
Arif November 14, 2015 13:56

The same thing happened with me when I was 6 or 7 years old, slept on sofa. When my father lifted me up to take me to my bed, I thought of being kidnapped. I, at once, screamed too loudly that everyone at home woke up and assembled in my room. When my mother asked "what happened? I replied innocently " I thought as if I was being kidnapped. :)
Onee-chan November 7, 2015 1:41

Pial, thank you for your comment. :D
pial November 3, 2015 5:42

Hi...Yes, It's really interesting..Ohhhh....Sometimes happened. Thanks for share....
Onee-chan October 30, 2015 23:01

ELF Noor, glad you like it. Thanks. :)

MARY, haha...they deceived us by their cute looks. :D Thanks for comment.
MARY October 30, 2015 22:10

Woah! Never trust in cute stuffed cows!
ELF-Noor October 30, 2015 17:14

Awesome.. i liked it..

keep writing,
Onee-chan October 30, 2015 14:46

Thank you for your appreciation, dear Tara. :)
Tara Benwell October 30, 2015 14:15

AH! Scary cow doll! Great story.