Well, I have some ideas but I can not choose one of them, so I wrote them all here. You can choose one of them and read. Here they are...
VENDETTA
Me, asleep, she, awake, walk, kitchen, knife, shiny, trenchant, walk, room, me, awake, she, smile, me, shocked, throat, bleeding, me, awake, panting, nightmares, she, asleep, me, walk, kitchen, knife, shiny, trenchant…
(I learned this way of writing -just using words- from Dick Skeen…)
IDEAL
Finally they were in his house. He said:" I like blond, Russian girls." She answered:" Thanks, and why your last love died?" He said:" Cause she was a blond, Russian girl…"
LOYAL
The voices of the flies in the room were earsplitting… She looked at her husband and said:" Don't worry darling, I won't bury you at all, you are mine forever…"
PENITENT
He killed her, angrily, by segmenting her body, then missed her a lot, so stated to intertwining her bleeding body parts again penitently…
BELIEF
She is asleep… my sweetheart girl… with her little fingers, straight black hairs and soft cheeks… I love watching her when she is asleep… now it is three days that she is asleep…
FAKE
She said loudly from the kitchen:" Do you want an apple honey?" I answered:" No darling, I'm full."
My wife went to Europe last month… she came back yesterday… but she called me from Italy last night… so who is this guy in my house?
Comments
ELF Noor... thanks for your like :)
MARY... I'm a fan of your blogs! It really made me happy that you commented here... THANK YOU...
mmm very dark and bloody stories. The most creepy ones that I've read till now, I like! :D
Good job Behrad!
Tara, it's really good that you comment here, we can see how much dark a person can behave in "Penitent" and "Vendetta"...
Seeker, thanks for the comment. Yes, that guy is sad, or maybe crazy...
These are all great, but "Penitent" is my favourite. I love the style of the first one too. Thanks for participating.
TaNjiN and Memae thanks for your "LIKES"
Elen... Really? A joke? Well it's my pleasure if I made you to laugh!!! thanks for you comment Elen...
Hmmm... creepy and scary but the second one i found it like a joke, lol :D
Onee-chan, you are right, belief is an combination of being afraid and crazy... thanks for your comment...