"Writing Challenge: Story by Numbers".
The number I chose is 21
Character: A man on the run (‘me’)
Place: A hall of mirror
Situation: Falling in love with an stranger
Object: An empty fridge
THERE IS NO LOVE WHEN YOU ARE HUNGRY:
This is the story of ‘me’ (‘me’ can be everyone or anyone, ‘me’ just a representation).
I saw her on the road. I found myself staring at her. May be because of the warmth of my sight, I felt a jerk in her slim flexible body, (she might be a belly dancer). She stared me back, with a slight smile on her nimble lips. The rose was striving to blossom. Then she turned away and disappeared. But, it was not a disappearance for me. She was all around me, as I was in a hall of mirrors and in all the mirrors it was her not me. I was just a beholder. I tried to run away, I was really running, I wanted to get rid of her images. She was smiling, and calling my name without opening her lips, as she knew me since the eternity. I jerk my head repeatedly. I again ran, but I did not know where I was going. Then I found myself in my apartment, standing before the fridge. I opened the fridge; there was nothing in the fridge. All at once, I realized that I was hungry!
I appreciate to have the link Marisa's Giant Storymaker to share.
Comments
Mohammad hope you have found answers to your questions.
Cool point!
Thanks Elena for encouragement. I as a learner do need appreciations.
Great Mishaikh, first of all my congrats for your writing and for your rich vocabulary, then I want to make you laugh by saying that hunger causes hallucinations! Ahahahahah, I'm joking, of course. Have a nice day!
This is what I observe from our daily life. You just recall the moment when you are hungry, what is your priority at the moment. I feel.................I express!
There is no love when you are hungry. The title is attractive ... Nice and interesting story.
Thanks Asif and Sono for your appreciations. Read my another story "25 Seconds the extract of life"
I really enjoyed reading it!
Awesome! You accepted the challenge "Writing Challenge: Story by Numbers" and done it extremely well.
Thanks Marisa and Galloping for encouragement.