"Writing Challenge: Story by Numbers".

"Writing Challenge: Story by Numbers".

The number I chose is 21

Character: A man on the run (‘me’)

Place: A hall of mirror

Situation: Falling in love with an stranger

Object: An empty fridge

THERE IS NO LOVE WHEN YOU ARE HUNGRY:

This is the story of ‘me’ (‘me’ can be everyone or anyone, ‘me’ just a representation).

I saw her on the road. I found myself staring at her. May be because of the warmth of my sight, I felt a jerk in her slim flexible body, (she might be a belly dancer). She stared me back, with a slight smile on her nimble lips. The rose was striving to blossom. Then she turned away and disappeared. But, it was not a disappearance for me. She was all around me, as I was in a hall of mirrors and in all the mirrors it was her not me. I was just a beholder. I tried to run away, I was really running, I wanted to get rid of her images. She was smiling, and calling my name without opening her lips, as she knew me since the eternity. I jerk my head repeatedly. I again ran, but I did not know where I was going. Then I found myself in my apartment, standing before the fridge. I opened the fridge; there was nothing in the fridge. All at once, I realized that I was hungry!

I appreciate to have the link Marisa's Giant Storymaker to share.

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Mishaikh April 25, 2016 7:44

Mohammad hope you have found answers to your questions.
Mohammad April 25, 2016 7:28

Cool point!
Mishaikh September 14, 2015 4:37

Thanks Elena for encouragement. I as a learner do need appreciations.
Elena September 13, 2015 19:52

Great Mishaikh, first of all my congrats for your writing and for your rich vocabulary, then I want to make you laugh by saying that hunger causes hallucinations! Ahahahahah, I'm joking, of course. Have a nice day!
Mishaikh February 26, 2014 15:11

This is what I observe from our daily life. You just recall the moment when you are hungry, what is your priority at the moment. I feel.................I express!
Mishaikh February 5, 2014 5:25

Thanks Asif and Sono for your appreciations. Read my another story "25 Seconds the extract of life"
Arif February 5, 2014 5:22

What a story, I really imagined while reading as if I was there.
I really enjoyed reading it!
Sono February 1, 2014 18:35

Awesome! You accepted the challenge "Writing Challenge: Story by Numbers" and done it extremely well.
Mishaikh February 1, 2014 3:19

Thanks Marisa and Galloping for encouragement.
Mishaikh February 1, 2014 3:18

Thanks Tara.

I really appreciate your attention to my submission.

Yes, "since the beginning of time' was in my mind, but it came out dressed up like that.

Thanks again, waiting for another challenge.

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