"Writing Challenge: Story by Numbers".

"Writing Challenge: Story by Numbers".

The number I chose is 21

 

Character: A man on the run (‘me’)

Place:        A hall of mirror

Situation:  Falling in love with an stranger

Object:      An empty fridge

 THERE IS NO LOVE WHEN YOU ARE HUNGRY:

 This is the story of ‘me’ (‘me’ can be everyone or anyone, ‘me’ just a representation).

 I saw her on the road.   I found myself staring at her.  May be because of the warmth of my sight, I felt a jerk in her slim flexible body, (she might be a belly dancer).  She stared me back, with a slight smile on her nimble lips. The rose was striving to blossom.  Then she turned away and disappeared.  But, it was not a disappearance for me. She was all around me, as I was in a hall of mirrors and in all the mirrors it was her not me.  I was just a beholder.  I tried to run away, I was really running, I wanted to get rid of her images.  She was smiling, and calling   my name without opening her lips, as she knew me since the eternity.  I jerk my head repeatedly.  I again ran, but I did not know where I was going.  Then I found myself in my apartment, standing before the fridge.    I opened the fridge; there was nothing in the fridge.  All at once, I realized that I was hungry!

I appreciate to have the link  Marisa's Giant Storymaker to share.

 

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  • Mohammad hope you have found answers to your questions.

  • Cool point!

  • Thanks Elena for encouragement.  I as a learner do need appreciations.

  • Great Mishaikh, first of all my congrats for your writing and for your rich vocabulary, then I want to make you laugh by saying that hunger causes hallucinations! Ahahahahah, I'm joking, of course. Have a nice day!

  • This is what I observe from our daily life.  You just recall the moment when you are hungry, what is your priority at the moment.  I feel.................I express!

  • There is no love when you are hungry. The title is attractive ... Nice and interesting story.  

  • Thanks Asif and Sono for your appreciations.  Read my another story "25 Seconds the extract of life"

  • What a story, I really imagined while reading as if I was there.
    I really enjoyed reading it!
  • Awesome! You accepted the challenge "Writing Challenge: Story by Numbers" and done it extremely well.

  • Thanks Marisa and Galloping for encouragement.

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