My sudden visit to my parents home
Today, I am in my parents home, sleeping there with my kids since yesterday.I free myself to express my feelings during this sudden visit. when my pregnant sister herself called me yesterday to invite and encourage me to leave my home for two days to join her in her visit to my parents home, I felt happy. The idea itself is good to act with no doubt. Because, I will go there to be with her in last days of her pregnancy. My kids enjoy themselves with their cousin " Sana ", playing and laughing. My mum herself celebrates us gladly, trying to make all tasty meals and snakes snacks to enjoy ourselves. My dad persuaded himself to traveling out country for working until Thursday, so, my kids and my niece could play noisily with no complaining by him. He always frowns at them selves when they make any naughtiness especially in his own living room where there is a library with a lot of books, that were bought by my parents themselves. My pregnant sister " Noura ", is in her ninth month pregnancy. she is very worried and try to prepare all her new daughter by herself. She helps herself to have easy birth by walking and relaxing by doing breathing practices. My visiting itself to my parents is intimate especially when I remember my life with mum, dad, sisters before getting marriage. But my problem itself that here is no PC, only my single sister laptop to use. She doesn't allow anyone to use it even her sisters themselves. So I allowed myself to beg her to allow me to use it. Due to there is no time to draft my blog to erase and edit it, I tried to write my blog here directly. I forced myself to be so careful about grammar and spelling, wishing you to like it. I consider you rselves as guarantors to correct my writing and giving me your sincere comments.
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22/01/2013
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Dear BR, I love the cosy atmosphere in your family. Wish your Sis would give birth easily with health and happiness then. :)
Happy time!
Thank you dear nida for your comment on my humble blog:)
This is such an interesting story, Bright-Rubies. I enjoyed reading it a lot.
Keep writing...
T hank you dear Raj for your words :)
Oh...MyEC....loved your this line: So I allowed myself to beg her.........:)
Thank you Mr. Expector Smith ...
Beautiful design!
:)
So, you see reflexive pronouns can be so tricky - even advanced learners may make mistakes when using them.
The sentence should be "He always frowns at themselves them...". Hope you get it!
Thank you dear Tara, i will fix them . I appreciate it ...
I'm glad you joined this challenge! It was fun reading your story. Did you read the lesson on reflexive pronouns? You are starting to understand, but please review it again. You seem to understand how to use "myself" and "ourselves" properly. However, your use of "itself" is incorrect. In some cases, you have used an intensive pronoun where it doesn't really make sense.
For example:She doesn't allow anyone to use it even her sisters themselves
When my pregnant sister herself called me yesterday to invite and encourage me to leave my home for two days to join her in her visit to my parents home, I felt happy.
Can you try to fix this one yourself? There are two different ways you could do it. If you have trouble, ask a friend to help you:
I consider yourselves as guarantors to correct my writing and giving me your sincere comments.
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