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Writing Challenge : Reciprocal Pronouns " each other & one another

Posted by selma on November 4, 2014

LOVE EACH OTHER & HELP ONE ANOTHER

We live together with my husband, my dog Callisto and our cat Fındık but also each other respect to one another,....we have respect for one another

In the beginning Callisto and Fındık hate hated each other but as the time went by, they love loved one another and recognize recognized their privacy. So they learned a lot about each other.

Callisto and I feel sad to dogs (inc. all animals) who are in the poor condition, I am sorry to say that in the cold weather they hurt each other to find some food. "I watch them, help them" as much as I can.

Additionally, god sake save them from that vandal people in the world.

Finally, Callisto and I surround each other all the time, every where & every time.

Thanks for reading,

Best Wishes,

SeLma,

not: We all members have learned so many things here, in My English Club.

I'd welcome any corrections. Corrections are welcome.

&, writing, another, challenge, each, one, other

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Tara Benwell November 11, 2014 18:24

Here's a reminder for everyone:

The word "advice" is not pluralized.

Thanks for the advice.

I appreciate your advice.

That was a good piece of advice.
Tara Benwell November 11, 2014 18:23

Great writing and nice work on the corrections! You have a nice bond with your pets. I think your first sentence could be a little simpler:

We I live together with my husband, my dog Callisto and our cat Fındık. We love and have respect for one another.
bet November 5, 2014 4:12

Nice topic!
selma November 4, 2014 16:26

Dear Expector,

Welcome,

really thank you for supporting me and advices,

Great to see you again :)

My best
selma November 4, 2014 16:24

Hi thank you all for taking the time,

Adriana,thank you so much. Great interest & help ! Not " a little " .....

Mishaikh,

Thank you for stopping by :)
Expector Smith November 4, 2014 12:18

Good try, selma!

Be carful that reciprocal pronouns can't be used as the subject of a clause. So you can say "we respect each other/one another", but not "each other respects one another'. And, you don't need any prepositions after "respect", so "respect to each other" is not correct.
Mishaikh November 4, 2014 10:50

Nice blog. Corrections already pointed out.
Andriana November 4, 2014 8:29

Hi Selma!I like the topic of your blog because I also love dogs and animals in general!Since you asked I would like to make some corrections.

''but also each other respect to one another'':better:we have respect for one another or we respect each other.

''In the beginning...hate..love..recognize..'':all three verbs have to be in Simple Past because you refer to something that used to happen in the past.So, hated,loved,recognized.

''god sake them'':god save them.

''not'':note

''I'd welcome any corrections'':better:(Any) corrections are welcome.

That's all I've noticed!I hope I helped a little!