writing challenge of Eva

My world has been spinning after hearing it! Now I have no idea about the difference between day and night. All seems same to me. I am in darkness and have a feeling that there is no brightness around me. What is life? Is it about sipping a cup of coffee with proper proportion of milk and sugar. And, what it would be if I forget to put black pepper or salt in my evening broth? What does it actually mean if someone have chocolate mousse instead of orange mousse? See, how many people are in mud, how much they are trying to make a better life. Maybe one of your good deeds can change their life, bring brightness. Please, put some colors in their life and help to remove the darkness.

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  • Thanks a lot, everybody!

  • You added the given words smartly. I see you're a professional in this matter.
  • Wow nice effort.........:-)

  • Thanks a lot....Misha, Jet, Lucinca, Nimzaf, peppo and Onee!

  • Dear Afro, a very short writing, but quite good to read. You have a good message here. That's the reality of life. Fine job! :)

    Would you consider this correction...

    .....what it would be if I forgot ...

  • Lots of things in a tiny space, cool!!! 

    Thanks for sharing, Afro :)

  • Beautyfuly expressed and well done.You have setup the contrast words so admirably.
  • Nice phylosophical thinking abt life :) I am deep in the mud, just gotta dig to get outta there :D Thabx for nice post!
  • Impressive piece of writing.

    Keep the pace up Afro.

  • @ Thanks a lot, Muhammad for your nice comment.
    @ bala, hihihi....am I cleaver, really?
    @ Eva, thanks sis.

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