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Writing Challenge: My Terrifying Two-Line Tale

Posted by OSAMA on October 29, 2015

My 13th Valentine

Spooky face bulgy eyes; ankle brace nipped in her thigh; a bottle of blood with a some juicy crud;
Sat on my table and said Hi; stinky smell with a welcoming spell; Hey Tinker bell, lets go to Hell ‼

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  • OSAMA October 31, 2015 7:06

    Thank you Seeker, Smith, Tara and Marry for analysis.
    I bet he can Marry :D

  • MARY October 30, 2015 22:41

    Tim Burton can make a movie from this :D

  • Tara Benwell October 30, 2015 14:10

    Whoa!  A creepy poem! 

  • Expector Smith October 30, 2015 13:14

    Terrifying!

  • OSAMA October 30, 2015 7:17

    Onee-chan, No Tinker bell cannot even nod in refusal xD

  • Onee-chan October 30, 2015 6:35

    Ha....ha.....!! Can tinker bell refuse? :D :D

  • Mishaikh October 30, 2015 4:03

    Yes that's hell of scary.  Very Good Rogue.

  • noaslpls October 30, 2015 3:03

    OHMY ... that was ... emmm ... really evil :D :D :D :D 

  • OSAMA October 29, 2015 18:05

    i know right, just felt evil today :D

  • Adaline Bala October 29, 2015 18:03

    Scary!

    Well evil! sorry Well Done! :)

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