The Lady In Red
Stealing all lights and hearts, leaving everyone in the room so speechless and amazed by her beauty and fragrance, she is like a morning star after a long dark night, dimming all the other stars around her. Her walk, smile, arrogance, and softness. However, sometimes you may see her as a tool of magic, used by a great dark magician to blind all eyes and hearts around her, You can see her dancing in the hall with her golden hair embodying perfection itself. And you can feel your soul moving with her soft and rhythmic steps on the floor, her dress is as red as a rose, or is it a white rose covered in blood?, maybe that's the secret of her charm, yes her red dress!, maybe it is a spell casted by a demon king. You can see white roses fused in her dress, but if you look closer they may seem more like hearts. These hearts belong to her fallen victims. Jealousy has been overwhelming every single woman in that room, they all wish to be in her shoes or at least close enough, they keep smiling from the outside; however, they are burning from the inside with the molten envy and fury. She dominated the stage with her strong magical presence. This was her night.
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Thank you for reading Bill :D glad u like it ...
Aha ! such a resplendent and detailed description of the given picture which gives the characters a more vivid appearance, and the use of metaphors makes it more poetic. Well done, bro ! :)
Thanks a million luci for understanding the overall of the description :) . it was a brilliant idea to write sth that lies behind a picture.we need more of this ... ^_^
Dear AG, thank you for reading and and commenting :) . I can see that you and i have chosen the same picture for the challenge.
Well it wasn't much of a story, but it was a brief opinion of one of the guests inside the room, he saw that lady in red . so the rader may guess it is a party. i also talked about women who saw her and felt jealous of her beauty and presence. that's what happens in parties.
i described the skeleton in the picture as a "dark magician" and also as "a demon king" . as if he was invisible.
I'm looking forward myself to read from you mister :) cheers .
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Allow me to express my opinion about your writing honestly.. I read a good description of the girl in a red dress.. some sentences were spectacular, like when you said "it is a white rose covered in blood" ..
But I did not read a story in your paragraph.. Also I did not see the skeleton of the black hood in your image.. I believe you were so excessive with describing the girl in the red dress that you skipped too much other interesting details..
However, I like to meat and read new people always.. I wish I could read more for you in the future.. it was nice to read your post.