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Posted by Mishaikh on June 26, 2015

FROM THE HEART OF A LOVER:

There may be thousands of lovers, but rarely there is one who is set on the level of a beloved. How nice it is to make you feel complete that there is someone in a corner of this earth who thinks about you, cares about you in his solitude. Your memory spreads a sweet smile on his face. This is enough for me.

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Arif June 27, 2015 7:49

The corrections I noticed

"There may be thousands of lovers, but there is the one who sets a level for his beloved."

And what about this sentences which seems too complicated

"How nice it is to make you feel complete that there is someone in a corner of this earth"
Mishaikh June 27, 2015 1:35

Thank you maya for such nice comment.
Mishaikh June 27, 2015 1:35

Anah, there is no bondage to have hope.

Thanks for your kind attention.
saba June 26, 2015 14:36

Nice blog! I like it.
Elena June 26, 2015 8:27

That's romanticism...love can give you everything so that you don't need anything else!
Arif June 26, 2015 6:31

Maybe, every lover sets different levels for his beloved, but the best lovers are those who set patience as the best level for his beloved. It helps them know how much their beloved trust in them. It is universally testified. In other words we can say "a slow and steady can win the race".
Mishaikh June 26, 2015 6:10

Thanks Rhaani and Pitse for such lovely comments.