Writing challenge: Advice from laptop

 Hi friends, who am i ?don’t you get me .I am always with you  .wherever  you go ,I am in your bag.. oh have you thought that I am your pen ,pencil ?no I am not .you have to guess me  more .still didn’t get  that who am I ?let me give more clue,  I am an electronic product ,some of them using me for passing  their time ,some of them using me for them education ,some of them for working , I preserve the information data,pictures,videos,files.I hope u get me now ,I am your friend  laptop.

Don’t use me more time

          I will be harmful to your eyes if you use me more time; it is dangerous to your health. If you have more work just give the relaxation to your eye in between your work after half an hour or one hour, don’t see my display continuously. In between your working, you have another option to save your eye vision from my wave and harmful air, that is use the average brightness option; it is already available in my feature.

Use me to explore your world      

        You can communicate with your friends by me , even wherever you live, I  have a feature of internet option that option will help you to explore your world. You can do presentation, you can read your books and  pass your time by playing games.

Don’t send virus into me

     You have to be careful because the intruders and hackers will stole your file which you was stored on me. They have a chance to destroy your important files by sending the unwanted harmful program .so try to protect   the important files from intruder by installing antivirus program into me.

Protect your files that  you was  saved into me

                 Put key lock into your important file that way you can save your files, pictures, videos, presentation from unknown person .put strong password on me.try to update the new feature and install useful application on me .

Don’t waste your time more on playing games with me:

               Don’t be addicted to play games with me ,try to use me in a good way to improve your knowledge .

 

                              Thank you friends. I do lot of mistakes  .I have tried my best. waiting for  your comments to correct my mistakes.

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  • yup Ofcourse :p

  • Femina am I too your friend? 

  • thanks elen .:) for using me
  • hi tara,I think i did a mistakes like these..1.oh (forget to put !) 2.After question mark i didnt put space....like that .Ii hope i wl not do these mistakes again.thankk so much for made me to think about it .and thank you so much for this great site
  • Hello Laptop, when you have a virus i am in panic, i think i will lose you! You are my daily tool :)

  • Dear Laptop, 

    Thanks for joining this challenge. I don't use you as often as I used to, but I do need you from time to time. I'm sorry, but you will not be coming with me on my holiday. Please enjoy the rest!

    Cheers,

    Tara

    Re corrections: Can you spot any errors in your punctuation and spacing

  • Thanks frnds and Don't forget to follow my advices :p
  • Thanks dear lap top..very  nice information u have add here.keep it up

  • Thanks for the advice, Laptop.

    English Tips: Pay attention to your punctuation and spacing. Spacing is used after the comma or period, not before. 

  • Dear laptop,
    some days ago you died but now I have new one and m trying to be a good friend with you, even though environment differs. Hope, I wont throw you soon outta the window :D
    Thanx for nice advices!!
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