Yesterday I received Atika's sms, she asked about me : how are you sister? Long time I didn't see you online ... Hope everything is okay.
Dear Atika,
Thank you for your sms; I missed you so much too. I have a few busy months ahead and must finish my studies. Though it's tough it's a joyful year for me. I am awaiting for completions I have short notice from my professor in completing my thesis. I don't want to "go out on a limb" to and repeat on the same mistakes. Yeah, I have had stressful days!
I am full of joy and happiness because you and my friends who have been there and supportive by cheering me on when my days were boring, you gave me wings and made my days beautiful.
Dear Atika,
I was delighted when I received your sms. Please forgive me if I have not been able to respond, because I'm too lazy set up my mobile phone :p
About your last letter I received a month ago, I am speechless! Your letter left a deep impression ... I never anticipated your sweet friendship. In early January and then on my birthday, you sent me encouraging words which has given me new spirit. I believe that you are one part of my destiny.
Dear Atika,
I am fine and thank you for always inquiring how I am getting on.
Cheers
Nadiyah
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Note :
Spirit, destiny, sms and time can be either countable or uncountable depending on their usages
Comments
It is a good way to write your letter here instead of messaging via phone. I liked it. :)
If learn english with this way, maybe I will be a faithful learner and I'll write more ...
thank you Teacher Nadira, Anele, Irina and mama thuonghuynh :)
Your challenge reminded me about the uncountable nouns. I searched some sites to explain it all ;) Thank you Tara for guiding :)
Great letter! Wow! Look how much your writing has improved, Nadiyah. I'm so proud of you. Don't forget to use a capital at the beginning of every sentence. This will tidy up your writing and help others realize how strong your English is!
Here is a picky punctuation point for you and all of your readers. It is against the law in English to place a comma between two complete sentences (without a conjunction). When they are short sentences that are closely related, you are allowed to use a semicolon.
Thank you for your sms, I missed you so much too.
Than you for your sms; I missed you so much too.
Note: I don't want to "go out on a limb" and repeat on the same failure.
Nadiyah!!!!!! Oh!!! my dear!!! I feel the excellent manner of writing. It's fantastic! Thanks.
Nadiyah the letters are awesome :)
Not many write in the traditional way though :(