I have two views to see at home since my computer is set in the central part of the living room. One is from the window on my left hand, which is only buildings without any decoration, but it is my cat's favorite because he could meet his friends pigeons and sparrows at times.
And, the other one is on my right hand from the window is also buildings, while I can see clearly one of our neighbors’ balcony, where they planted many flowers and trees to be a little garden. I quite enjoy it, particularly before going to work in the morning. It makes me full of energy to start my work every day. Thank you my dear neighbor!
How about the scene outside of your windows? Please share with us yours.
*This post is inspired by Tara's writing challenge#5 below.
http://my.englishclub.com/profiles/blogs/writing-challenge-5-windows-of
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Yes,Anita. I also have my own garden but it's very small as below, so I like to see my neighbor's.
Do you have some plants in front of your house too? Thanks for your nice comment.
Dear Tara, I've deleted the first is from the sentence.
Great!
How about this one?
And, the other one is on my right hand from the window is also buildings,
Dear Tara, please find the revised sentences in blue, thank you!
Perfect Grace! Now let's work on a small problem in sentence #2. This one can be split into two:
One is from the window on my left hand is only buildings without any decoration,
but it is my cat's favorite because he could meet his friends pigeons and sparrows at times.
Thank you, Martin. I'm glad to have your comment here. Yes, the second one is quite colorful. It nurtures my eyes and even my soul too.
Right, Nida. He quite hungers for being there when I open the window each time. It seems that if I am careless to open the whole window, he might probably go out from that.
Thank you for dropping by. ^_^
Hello Forget-me-Not,
I'm glad you liked the view too. You're right. Green plants can relax our mood and also make us feel fresh. Thanks for the comment. :)
Dear Tara,
I wish I were there, so I could play snow or even lie on it to experience its cool. Hope to see that giant ice fort from your window once you intend to update your post as it never happened in our place.
Re corrections: I have reorganization the sentences in bold. Please help to check it. Thank you.
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