Have you heard of Seth Godin? He is a blogger with a huge fan base. People enjoy his style of writing and his mission to motivate. He wants people to be doers.
Seth Godin has great advice for business people, marketers, and anyone who has a creative idea. Why is Seth Godin a good model for bloggers? He carefully chooses every word.
For this month's writing challenge, we are going to work on a writing skill called paraphrasing. We are going to borrow some of Seth's blog posts to practise this skill. When you paraphrase, you put someone else's writing into your own words. You explain or clarify the text that you read by rewriting it. It is best to use a different format than the original. Paraphrasing helps you avoid plagiarizing.
Your Task
2) Choose a post that interests you. Look through the archives to find one at your reading level. Some are short and simple and others are longer and more detailed.
3) Read the post you chose a number of times. Then close the post. (Try not to look at it as you write.)
4) Create a new blog post called "Writing Challenge #32: Paraphrasing Seth"
5) Write some important points from Seth's blog in your own words. Don't use the same format as Seth. You can paraphrase Seth by writing a list, a letter, an essay, a paragraph, etc. (In other words, if Seth wrote a list, don't paraphrase as a list.)
6) Include your source. (See my example.)
7) After you post your challenge, come back here and leave a link to your post.
*If you borrow any exact wording from Seth, use "quotation marks".
Paraphrasing checklist. Did you......?
- put the ideas into your own words
- change the form of the original text
- give details (more than a summary)
- credit your source
My Example: Paraphrasing Seth
Which came first the library or the librarian?
In a recent blog post, book lover Seth Godin took an in depth look at the past and future of libraries. To paraphrase, there was a time, long ago, when only wealthy people could afford books. Over the years, libraries made it possible for the average person to have access to reading materials. Today, the library is undergoing a huge change. Publishing is moving to digital platforms. What this means is, some of the books on library shelves are beginning to gather dust. This is especially true for educational materials. Information changes so quickly, and eBooks are the latest rage. Will libraries and librarians become obsolete in the digital age? Seth hopes not.
According to Seth, the library of the future will be a place where ...
- children learn how to find their way through the labyrinth of resources available on the Internet
- people learn how to get things done more efficiently (of course the librarians will have to know all of the tools and tricks that the Internet offers; they will do more teaching and less shelving and shushing)
- all patrons have access to web terminals and there is never a wait
- online resources are the main event (there will still be books, but resources such as outdated encyclopedias will not be used for assignments)
Look at it this way. We'll still have libraries, they'll just be more connected to real information, and the people who run them will be some of the most tech savvy people you know. (Let's hope.)
"When kids go to the mall instead of the library, it's not that the mall won, it's that the library lost." Seth Godin
Source:
Godin, Seth Seth's Blog [Internet]. New York. May 16, 2011 - [cited June 10, 2011] Available from http://sethgodin.typepad.com/seths_blog/2011/05/the-future-of-the-library.html
(Above is an example of a formal citation. Use this for academic purposes. The source below is fine for MyEC purposes.)
Seth's Blog: The future of the library (May 16, 2011)
4 Suggested Seth Posts (If you can't choose your own.)
Buying an Education or Buying a Brand
Useful phrases when paraphrasing
Basically
In other words
As (author name) mentioned/said/put it/wrote
To sum up
As I see it
What he/she means is
In short
Think of it/look at it this way
Note: This month's writing challenge was inspired by a teacher friend named Tyson Seburn. He practises paraphrasing with his advanced students. I enjoyed his presentation at a recent online conference.
Comments
Dear Tara,
Thanks a lot for your nice and encouraging words and for everything you have been doing to help us improving.
How can we ever repay you?!
We are really grateful.
I just want to say thanks a lot for taking your time in helping us hone our writing skills despite your busy schedule. I'm glad to have an excellent teacher like you. Take care!
Happy teaching!
Dear writing challenge members,
I am so excited that a number of you took my challenge this month! After I posted it, I wondered if any of you would be brave enough to try it. It required you to take a few extra steps in comparison to previous challenges. I am so proud of all of you! I hope you'll continue to practise this very practical writing skill.
Cheers!
Tara
Hello Tara,
Thanks for the great challenge I love it. It's tough :S
I tried hope I didn't fail paraphrasing and slipped to plagiarizing :SS
Waiting for your feed back.
Hello Tara,
How are you? Here's my response to this month's writing challenge. I hope you'll like it.
http://my.englishclub.com/profiles/blogs/writing-challenge-32-3
Hi again, dear Tara
Thanks a lot for your encouraging and supportive comments. I always enjoy taking part in your super unique challenges. Thanks.
Have all the best
:)
Dear Tara, this is my work: http://my.englishclub.com/profiles/blogs/writing-challenge-32-2
Hi dear Tara,
Thanks a lot for the really interesting and useful idea of paraphrasing. I do love it. Thanks.
Here is my homework, dear teacher.
Have a great time
:)
Hi Expector,
Great writing! Thanks for paraphrasing one of Seth's very important posts! I absolutely agree with it.
I hope others will try this challenge thanks to you.
Cheers,
Tara