Its kinda late but here is my writing challenge for picture stories (^-^)?
Once upon a time in far-far land.. There a princess called meowna.. who is the most beautiful witch cat of all.. Her beauty has been spread all over meow kingdom..
One day, there’s a king from another country want to propose to princess meowna.. he asked his people to prepared the gifts for princess..King : My dear princess.. would you marry me?Meowna : I will but under one conditionKing : What is it.. I will get everything that you want..Meowna said.. Bring me a shark from deep sea and his blood..The king went back to his country and commands his best guards to bring him a shark from deep sea and blood.
Sadly, many his guards died when fighting with the shark.. blood to blood.. body to body their fight until end of their life..Due to frustration of failure, the king started to send his people by promising a big reward. More and more his people died..Princess meowna watched from far with sad faces…One of the king’s people managed to killed the shark and bring it to the king. With happy faces the king go to meowna’s kingdom.The king present it to princess meowna..King : My fair princess, here is the shark and blood that you requested.. now will you marry me?Meowna : No, I would not marry you King..King : But why..Meowna turns her back to the king and departed from her throne..The End..Picture credit : Forget-me-Not & natasha yankovskaya=========================================So what is the moral of this story.. hehe
Fizzy, I'm sorry for not noticing your blog yet. We weren't friends then and I didn't get notifications. I'm glad seeng the photo of my Diana as an illustration here. The tale is very interesting, though I'm not fond of fary tales. It's a pity, but there isn't any ending in this story in my view. Yoh have offered you a good sequel.
Thank you !
Oh my, no one lived happily ever after... but that's ok. The story is a little bit like an old Japanese folktale "Taketori monogatari", where a princess didn't want to get married and asked men for something impossible to get (ref). Maybe you should justify why Meowna turned her back, otherwise she is just a wagamama (chameleon character) princess. Say, "Princess Meowna knew that the shark was taken from the aquarium... or something like that";D
Wow! Great story. I was so surprised to see a shark introduced in this tale after meeting Princess Meowna. Is the moral of the story that we should not pass on our difficult tasks? "Do things for yourself."
Thanks for taking the challenge Fizzy! You are a great story teller.
Here is a bonus challenge: Can you improve this sentence?
"Meowna turn his back to the king and depart from there.."
Typical princess always demands impossible.. and when you still fulfill her wish, she won't keep her promise. Well prince was stupid too, he could have had just let to kidnap the princess.
There isn't morale in your story, only actual facts. lol
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Thank you !
Thanks for your comment. I just noticed minor mistake on that wording.. so i have edited it..
Meowna turn his back to the king and depart from there..
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Meowna turns her back to the king and departed from her throne
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Thanks for taking the challenge Fizzy! You are a great story teller.
Here is a bonus challenge: Can you improve this sentence?
"Meowna turn his back to the king and depart from there.."
Nice story.
There isn't morale in your story, only actual facts. lol